Reviews for Companions of the Dawn
MythStar Black Dragon chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
That was cute cant wait to read what happens next

bidadieu chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I really like that it started on a happy note. Then there's also that hint that Kerry has HAD a life ever since Michel left. It's refreshing.

Well done!

As for criticisms, not much... it's just the lay out, maybe bold the title and piece the paragraphs a bit more? Just to make it easier to read. Other than that, the story itself is good!