Reviews for Who Would You Choose?
LazyPerfectionist17 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Loved. It. Seriously, it was rereshing (and heartbreaking) to see what is probably the reality of jane and lisbon's relationship. Well written :)
Aeidhryn chapter 1 . 1/14/2012

He chose Lisbon when he shot Dumar. So... nope.
VioletKushlevi chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
The fiction is great and I think it might turned up in a show.

But I think that Lisbon would stayed strong , and won't cry.

And I repeat : nice work ;3
TropicalStormEmily chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Can't believe I just saw this.

But good. Very good. I'm glad it wasn't a fluff ending because I no longer appreciate fluff in the Mentalist fandom.

It was a LOT of dialogue, but well done.


Also, true. He would pick Red John, if he had the choice outright.
In The Name chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Wow. Despite it's length, this was quite a powerful fic. I'm glad you posted it. I could feel the emotions in the story boiling. It was wonderfully written. It addresses the question we've all been wondering, in a realistic way. I enjoyed reading this, thank you.
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Kuhlama chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I 3 this :) The story is well written and in character.

On my pessimistic days I agree with you...
Nimueiswriting chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Despite i dont like the ending (im a jisbon shipper and i think Jane has his own little heart and care too much for Lisbon) i really really like your fic. Its well written, your use of the adjetives and their reactions, in character as theyre in the tvshow. Its a really good fic! ;)
wishingformorewishes chapter 1 . 12/11/2011

It's so good and so sad and so heartbreaking (LOL you're just good at writing that sort of stuff aren't you).

I really wish he would have chose Lisbon, but I have a feeling that he would choose Red John. But next week's episode might change that! :D :D

Beautiful one shot! Keep writing3 :D

justaregularfangirl chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
You're making me cry! :'( You should write another chapter, just because I really REALLY want to see Jane's reaction!

THIS IS SO ANGSTY but I like it(:

You're a supersupersuper good writer! :D
Donnamour1969 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
While this was very well-written and an interesting point of view, I disagree completely! He's chosen Lisbon over RJ before. He shot Hardy, a huge link to RJ, to save her. If a scenario like Lisbon suggested in your story happened, he would rescue Lisbon and let RJ go, of that I have no doubt.

But I could see how you might see Jane this way, because he does get very dark and obsessive where RJ is concerned. Thanks for sharing your perspective; I hope you aren't offended that I disagreed.
yellowbrite chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Wow!That was fantastic, I swear!I liked it so much. A little too sad but so real. I just hope he either lied or hadn't realized his true feelings yet.

Thank you for the story ;))
chymom chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Interesting. More stories?
Country2776 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
this is good I just hope this doesn't happen on the show but jane chose lis over hardy so I hope he would choose her