Reviews for A Moment Before Death
torakxrenn chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
nice one shot
MethLabrador chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
Love this! Very well written :)
Flame-Leopard chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Hi I also reviewed ur other story. Great story, or rather extract, once again! U should consider being an author when ur older. When I read this, it was like I was reading Paver's words. Awesome job!
Motokoro chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! That is ssoooooo sweettt! I literally cried at this part. I mean like, TORAK! DON"T LEEEEAAAVEEEE HEEERRR!
immortus chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I am going to say the truth. I am a writer and loved this story. hope you don't mind me favouriting because I have been on fanfic and only have 6 favourites. you included.

mamygo chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
very cute story...
but it's the second note i like the most haha :P
A Wind Has Blown the Sky Away chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
I love this scene in the book, because it is one of the tiny flashes we are granted of what could be, and probably will be (but we will never witness), between Renn and Torak.
I long ago accepted that we would never be given more than the smallest hints of the romantic feelings between them, because it just isn't that kind of book. Still, I can't help wish for more of these. Thank you for your interpretation, I enjoyed it thoroughly. It was well written as well.
Well done!
lalaloona chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Man, I'd forgotten just how amazing this series is.
BloodySundays chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Amazing story, it made me all warm inside. Loved reading it and I love they way you really "caught" Torak. Great job!
XYouXKnowXWhoXIXAmX chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
I tell u something that was one of the sweetest things ever! I feel so sorry for him! great work!
ScarlettAlexandra chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
so sweet.
Opal chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Adored this part! Another one where everything you were hoping to hear was almost, but never quite said - so thanks for filling in the blanks! Great story :)
Kavazya chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
First of all, you have no idea how happy I was to discover a new CoAD fic. Secondly, this was awesome! I love Ghost Hunter (and Michelle Paver, of course), but this scene was written very omniscient and vague. It was great how you explored Torak's perspective more in depth.