Reviews for The Velvet Room's Fools
rebfan90 chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
great story!
Gur40goku chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
Found this on Achieve had to fav it and review
RebukeX7 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Stumbled upon this by accident but great job! Could really feel the emotions lol
CrimsonMagi94 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Now THAT is some intense shit right here. Even though it was short, I could feel the emotions, the sheer rawness of Elizabeth's desperation and Margaret's devotion. Well done!
aquariusmist chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Aww, that was so sad. :( You did great on writing how they felt.
Shadowdorothy chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Ah, so you wrote this masterpiece. I read it on another site, but couldn't find out who wrote it. A well written tale of battle and mercy towards a loved one. Do you plan on doing a piece like this from Theodore's POV? I'd be interested in reading that.
Heartless Lotus chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Fave! I love how desperate Elizabeth is to save Minato~!
Shadow09 chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Whoa this is very good. I love the way you describe Elizabeth and Margaret determination to their wild card.
Shin Hitorigami chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
I love this story, it's so heartwrenching to see that two siblings would fight for their loved ones, I feel Elizabeth's pain, she wanted Minato back more than anything... why hasn't this story gotten more reviews? You did pretty good on this one, you shoud make a sequel.