|Reviews for Clockwork|
| Santana-Snixx-Lopez chapter 38 . 3/5
I can't even begin to explain how amazing I think this story is! It's fantastically written and I love it more each time I read it...
P.S. I've read it over 15 times. Seriously.
| Walker chapter 38 . 3/3
I really like this as the ending. It has that full circle feeling to it, ending at a convention like it started at one. This time though, Santana makes two decisive victories over the evil Artie, and she and Brittany are working together nicely. They both give each other confidence where other people (actually, Artie in both cases...) have torn them down.
Great story overall. Thanks for sharing it.
| singlevow chapter 28 . 3/2
I just wanted to tell you that I've just reread this fic and it still captivated me just like the first time. It's definitely in my top 3 fics!
| darkstring chapter 27 . 2/28
This is by far, one of my favorite fanfics. Thumbs up!
| Wynx chapter 38 . 2/27
For any of you that have ever pressured or taken Gorshenin to task over Clockwork, just stop reading this now because I have nothing pleasant to say to you. Honestly people take the gift that we have been given graciously. The last time I checked no one was making any money sharing their stories and the majority of authors are just people with an idea and a love of writing not professional authors.
Now for any of you new to this story, good news you are absolutely going to love it. It is an amazing story of friendships, of conquering demons and finding ways to overcome ourselves and let our light shine. The story takes you on a wonderful journey as we get to watch our girls, Santana and Brittany, find each other at the exact right moment in their lives. Build trust, build a friendship, and build a relationship as they help each other win the day. It ends the exact way it should, with an open door or open stage if you will, of un-limitless potential.
I for one do not think the ending could have been any better. How perfect for Santana to be standing on the stage with the threat of her greatest fear potentially playing out on the screens. But this time she is not alone, she has a partner who even though forced to do some creative thinking to side step her weakness is able to skillfully steer her girl to safety. I left this story feeling that if they can handle that, they can handle anything.
Outstanding work Gorshenin; this epic story is definitely something you should certainly be proud of.
Side note: Hey G, I do have a question for you. What happened to your gnome? He used to be such a happy garden gnome, now he’s up to his eyeballs in water.
Hit me up some time, my friend.
| Ujin chapter 38 . 2/24
I am not a techie person but I surely got a glimpse. You are so good by the way.
Hope you can come up with more stories.
| Ujin chapter 29 . 2/24
Entirely different with your 2ns story! I love this. Go San! Women Enpower. Yah!
| Guest chapter 38 . 2/17
Okay, I know you asked for people not to just review about Clockwork, but I just wanted to say that I loved it, and I really like how you ended it. Honestly, until I actually clicked on your profile I thought you had ended it perfectly. It's well-written and I just really liked it. I'm just gonna stop gushing now, I'm starting to feel a bit awkward.
| Guest chapter 38 . 2/14
You should be super proud of this story. It is completely brilliant, moving and all-together wonderful.
| kestralgirl1 chapter 38 . 2/11
I absolutely friggin' love your writing style, the originality of your ideas and just how well you bring the stories to life. You are a truly amazing author.
I've read both of your stories now and fell in love with them immediately, especially loving the fact of how different they both are. The amount of detail you put into each of them is insane and blows my mind how accurate it all sounds. Even if it isn't completely accurate, you wouldn't be able to tell with how well both the dialogue and the narration flows.
I cant believe I put off reading Clockwork for as long as I did, I must me mad.
I noticed you've marked this is marked as complete and I only have 1 critique about this. It's nothing major and it's purely my opinion but I just wish you hadn't ended it as abruptly as you did. I felt it needed 1 more chapter just to tie things up a bit more, such as - Artie getting his comeuppance for everything he's done, Sue Sylvester finally speaking with Santana personally, and maybe even an epilogue showing how well Santana's new programme is doing, how she and Britt/Quinn and Rachel have progressed, and why Jesse got the big time promotion instead if being out on his arse.
Like I say, it's just my opinion and other fans may like it the way it is, I personally just like to see all loose ends tied up and I can't resist a good epilogue.
However, that is my only critique. Besides that, as I said before you had me sold and in love within the first chapter, of both this and I Need a Medic. Not sure which I love more now lol.
One word to describe your works of art - masterpieces. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next .
| Smooze chapter 1 . 2/9
OMG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story! I LOVE it!
| Guest chapter 38 . 1/6
Wow what an amazing story. I am so blown away. I love the originality, the maturity of the characters esp brittany n santana. Its really wonderful from the dumb blone or insecure lopez that we so often read. This is so so refreshing. I love the plot, the politics, just everything.. its so well balanced. This should be a movie or TV drama! You r an amazing writer. Plse update soon... cant wait to see what happens. Am gonna read ur other fic.
| Alicia Barros chapter 38 . 12/26/2013
I absolutely love this story! Looking forward to see what you do next.
| modiggity chapter 38 . 12/24/2013
Absolutely a great story. Brava.
| Guest chapter 38 . 12/17/2013
I absolutely loved this story