Reviews for Alive for the First Time
Sprog101 chapter 1 . 2/27
Cute! I like it!
BookLover31 chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Will you do me a huge favor?

To please continue the story.

- I mean... you cant just end the story - which is wonderfull by the way - there!

- Who is the abusive boyfriend?

- What happens in the last two hours of detention?

- what happens after detention is over?

-What will Charlie do when he finally gets to know the truth ab. Bellas boyfriend?

- and what about Bella and the bad boy Edward Cullen?


Dorte (booklover31)
Queen of True Love chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Would love to see where this goes...
Tinkrbell23 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Looooove it! Yes I love it! UpdAte soon please! I love how u start the story off. Ur a really good writer. I hope we get to see what happens in the last 2 hours of detention in the next chapter. Oh man when Edward got up and put his hand on her shoulder I wanted to melt.
cbmorefie chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Nice start, keep it coming!
Verity29 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
love it so far! please update soon! ;P 33 Xx
LullabyGirl chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I'm certantly intrigued, keep writing you have one reader here

Big love

Sara Lautner chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
So far so good :)
TinyButDangerous chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
So, who is the mystery "he"? Is it Mike, because it really sucks when people put Jacob as the abuser. Jacob's too nice.

This story is awesome, please keep it up. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
spoby4eva chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Plzzzzzzz upDATE
you dont need to know chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I THINK IT'S WONDERFUL! Keep going plleeeeeaaasssseeee?
Ninasa1122 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
:D this seems like a freaking amazing story! If I do say so myself! :D hope to get another update out of you! Glad u started writing a again! :D