|Reviews for The Next Great Annoyance|
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/25
| Dragonhulk chapter 3 . 6/26
Rereading this, I almost expect that Tommy is a closet comic book geek, with one nice kid in the orphanage letting him read a copy of X-men. His great purblood plan? Open a school strictly for first gen magic users. Sure it's technically a step back, but put them in an environment where they aren't persecuted and pressured to fit in and they may *gasp* have new and innovative ideas on how to use magic.
The Marauders on the other hand were on a quest for the holy grail when they ran into this group of French Knights, and things quickly spiraled from there.
| bleeb90 chapter 3 . 6/3
This story is awesome, too bad you never went further with it!
| anonymous chick chapter 3 . 4/10
Update please! I really like this little story so far!
| moon so bright chapter 1 . 3/19
| Writingperson chapter 3 . 1/24
please return to this story...
| KrisB-71854 chapter 3 . 12/12/2014
Um, I'm still wondering why he cares about dumbledore. I can see helping out the prankers. The best joke would be setting them all up with hot super models or veela.
Obviously, this Lily was all evil ... well marrying a Snape qualifies. Well at least incompetent. I think that he should just leave them to it. He should actually look into Tom Riddle and think about hooking up with Narciss or fixing Tom up with both Narcissa and Bella as well as giving him the moral high ground to go against Dumbledore.
This one isn't the master of death. He is more like a ghost portal for them to easily come through and mentally scar the living relatives/friends/family.
I'm actually curious on where you could go with this. Hooking Harry up with Fleur is rather easy. I could see James being an ass/jerk still. Sirus wasn't really that much better. If they never really grew out of it... I'm not sure how Remus and Peter could have turned out. Remus would likely have been far more happy. The worst thing that I could see you doing to Peter is marrying him to Molly instead of having Arthur marry her.
In fact, that could have been one of those fun differences. Peter got caught up in a long term prank involving love potions, alcohol, accidentally marrying a hot older girl while shuffling her crush into the group of prankers, which means that they also have an odd but ineffective muggle watching thing as well going on.
| phantomzeke chapter 3 . 11/15/2014
Yet another gem that I admittedly avoided before that deserves more chapters. I'd even be wiling to attempt the typing if you have need. I suspect this will be a trend...
| werdnasnikpoh chapter 3 . 9/5/2014
I'm a bit disappointed that Harry Potter isn't interested in Hermione. I thought they were a perfect couple until Luna Lovegood turned up. Now I can't choose between Hermione and Luna and think Harry should just marry both of them. If Harry wants three girls or more in a story like this, with alternate earths, then he should marry two Luna's and/or two Hermione's.
| KSpringer chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
Man, I like this story! Wish it was complete...
I'm gonna look at your other stories and see what else you have. You're good!
| omh666 chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
| Damion Black Blaze chapter 3 . 6/7/2014
Love it, couldn't stop laughing at Harry's responses to their bigotry and idiocy.
| lolreader39 chapter 3 . 5/27/2014
more please. this is great.
| Malix2 chapter 3 . 4/18/2014
| eliteshadow chapter 3 . 4/8/2014
nice chapter please update and post more chapters soon i would love to read more of this story so please post more soon!