Reviews for Five Firsts and One Last
Star1377 chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
-I thought you were afraid of heights.
I am. But it's ok, I'm looking at you.
I loved this line and the story is just so sweet and perfect
Zarter-4-Eva chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
This was an amazing story. I cried, unfortunately, but that's how you know its good.
Crystal Hope Dragon chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
So sweet, what a great way to portray Narcissus, and a great plot. I love it, please keep up the great work.
SomuchSarcasm chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Beautiful :)

I was really touched. Good job!
DandyBoyDaniel chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Gorgeous little piece. I like the unique point of view in which it was written. I love how it spans so many years so concisely and explores a range of emotions in such few words. I've always been fond of Narcissa and also hold the point of view that she would be supportive of Scorpius. She's characterized so endearingly here, as are Scorpius and Albus. I also like that the relationship is not without heartache, which makes the ending all the more sweet.
Letmeinyurarmsxxx chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
elizabeth ann chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
This is one of the best stories ive read in a while great job!
hp-scribbler chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I really enjoyed reading this - loved the 2nd person style writing! And Scorpius' character in particular was just perfect, exactly how I imagine him. Thanks for writing this!
literatemermaid chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
That was beautiful, and that is the only way I can possible put it. :)
Be My Master chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
I loved this, i fucking loved this. My god, i nearly cried when Scor's grandmother died!
aryllia chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Oh, that was so sweet and sad and beautiful - I'm laughing and crying at the same time. Definitely a favourite. Heck, if I had the option to arrange them myself it would be one of my favourite favourites.

I've liked Narcissa ever since the sixth book and this is just - just beautiful. Brilliant indeed.
butterflylover7143 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
OH MAH GAWD! this was freaking BRILLANT! LOOOOVED it! so beautifully written and so perfectly angsty and romantic! awww! so sweet! BRILLANT, BEAUTIFUL JOB!
nicawonder chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
this was really nice
tvandel chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
so tender
Sunshine-aki chapter 1 . 12/11/2011