|Reviews for Predator|
| orangeapeal chapter 1 . 2/16
Now here's a version of Edward that works with the vampire-verse. I love that Breaking Dawn left you with this story in your head instead of some sappy wedding thing!
| PurpleBrina17 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
well damn...edward is a nut job lol it was kinda awesome.
| VanessaJJ chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Great but how come you let us wonder if he stopped?!
| bspest04 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
You ended it there?!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Good! But what happened after that? Was she changed, died, alright? Please write a future take or something :-)
| hpdude-4life chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Omgosh that's how it actually ends..
| Sailaranel chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
No freaking way!
Seriously did not expect that, even if the signs were there. Wow!
| Pankeka chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Did he stop or not?
What. ! :)
| maipigen chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
...Now that's just cruel is what that is...really...More please, I know it's artistic and cool and overall awesome, but seriously, write more! :D
| ColorsWithCrap chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
what the fuck happens now?! really great writing and i feel for bella. but seriously. does he kill her?!
| artisticteach chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Awesome :) wish you would put up a second part but it's great how it is too.
| IccaSpriggs chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
You're evil. And I loved this.
Thanks for sharing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
He should change her long time ago. She should ask to be changed. They are both morons.
| mamamalea chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
You should expand this story. Id like to know what happens.
| xet chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
i hope you can expand on this story. It looks really good.