Reviews for Without a voice
Violets and Lilies chapter 3 . 5/31/2013
Interesting that Giddy wants a family and honest job-nice twist to give it.

You did a nice job describing the scene-I hardly remember what the Coachman was wearing till I read that bit.
Violets and Lilies chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
Very clever how you got them from handing off Pinocchio to Stromboli to the bar room meeting with the Coachman. I also liked the bit where Giddy waved at Pinocchio.
Violets and Lilies chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
How interesting! I like how that you're using lesser written about characters. I also like how you use the movie quotes, plus the character's thoughts. I could start feeling bad for Giddy maybe...
Cupcakes11 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Very good story so far! I watched that movie yesterday and I love it!
civilwarrose chapter 3 . 8/24/2012
This is wonderfully written! I love the dialogue and the interactions between Honest John and Gideon, Gideon's inner thoughts, and the scene with the Coachman. I hope you continue.
PMD-Rokon chapter 3 . 8/24/2012
It's really good! Please continue!
penguinsskrp chapter 2 . 12/28/2011
Omg! I love this! You've done an amazing job so far! Keep up the good work ;) and please, please, pleasseee continue!

p.s. HJ is my favorite character in Pinocchio! 3
Hokuto Uchiha chapter 2 . 12/23/2011
I laughed when Gideon hit Honest John on the head with his club XD

Great writing :) Keep on writing this, please
iamtyping98 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Wow, I've never even considered this guys point of view. I didn't even know his name! It's interesting the way Giddy seems to be the one with all the brains. I love this and can't wait for more!