|Reviews for Dark Future part I: Darkness Falls|
| 2legit2quit chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
you really need to work on correct grammar. I liked how you used good vocabullary. In the future you need to make your stories more
| King Spritzee chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
O.o You killed Pet Force? No fair! Not right! Pancakes! Good story, you should continue, and review my story, curse you!
| Kathleen A. Ramirez chapter 8 . 5/24/2005
OMG! THAT WAS SO FREAKING COOL!
Dude! You are a genius! I love the ending of chapter 8 so much! It is halirous! Dude! Continue on! You are cool in my book!
| Nightw2 chapter 8 . 1/8/2005
Welcome back and thanks for updating this story. Great dramatic material with touches of comic relief sprinkled in. I'm, of course, referring to all the exchanges in the chapter. I particularly liked K-Niner's thinking back to his fights with Pet Force (much like how some old soldiers DO look back at their toughest battles with some measure of fondness).
| martin chapter 7 . 8/26/2004
this is the best (almost) fic ive ever read. Hurry up with chapter 8.
| Brad Eugene Palmer aka Nightw2 aka Comickook chapter 7 . 2/21/2003
Hm-boy. Thank you, thank you, thank you for finally updating this story. It may have taken you a while, but it was WELL WORTH the wait. I absolutely loved the P.O.V.s of Orion and Shadow. Please continue this story as soon as you can.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2002
i didnt really read your story. how can you ppl write fanfic on comics? thats so weird. but i really look up to you ppl who can.
| Nightw2 chapter 6 . 10/22/2002
I understand, Rio. Stuff happens and things come up. I'll keep an eye open for your new story too. Thanks for warning us.
| Nightw2 chapter 5 . 9/14/2002
Well, it may have taken three months, but it was WELL worth the wait. You are one incredibly talented writer. Keep up the good work.
| laura chapter 4 . 8/11/2002
wow. all of the chapters so far are GREAT! I like all your notes and stuff. I think that the only things you need to work on is writing faster and stop critisising your work so much.
sorry about the death in your family
| Reiji Neko Mitsukai chapter 4 . 8/3/2002
If you look at my Bio, Garfield isn't listed. But I have, in fact, been a fan of Garfield and Pet Force for quite some time. I like cats too. I found this fic to be very interesting. I liked it. You really should finish it. It's got a lot of potential.
| Natalie7 chapter 4 . 7/29/2002
I likes! Ok, you have another review now, so FINSH IT! please? :)
| Patchwork Poltergeist chapter 4 . 7/22/2002
Man, I seriously need to update this..and cansomeone other than Nightw review this thing? I feel unapreciated here! Anyway, look put for chapter 5, it should be up in about a week or so.
| Nightw2 chapter 4 . 6/11/2002
Superb work thus far. As I said before, this story gets better with each chapter. Bravo on a well-done job thus far.