|Reviews for Kiri's Phantom Blade|
| random reader chapter 16 . 3/31
Post another chapter ASAP coz things are getting very exciting.
| Aegorm chapter 16 . 3/30
I hate a couple of things in this chapter.
The fact that you think Haku can use/learn Rasenshuriken is idiotic. Naruto demolished his arm multiple time trying to make that jutsu, and it takes HALF of his sage mode chakra, Haku can never hope to use such a jutsu.
Second: Rasengan isn't a jutsu Konoha can give away, the only person who knows how to teach it is Jiraiya... And he went missing nin...
Besides that the mizukage is stupid, letting suigetsu free because his brother was a loyal and heroic ninja? Even tho he tried to attack/kill/steal from your son in law and daughter? Suuuuure... Sorry dude but this story just went downhill, great start, and then it became weaker
| MickDunD chapter 16 . 2/11
I love this story. Please update it.
| Mega Latios 1988 chapter 5 . 12/25/2014
Your story and ideas are good so far. Your language and grammar are fine. Only thing I want to point out is that perhaps you could space things out a bit more. It would make this story a better read. It seems like your plotline is a bit rushed. Otherwise good job on your fic thus far
| Neeehhhh chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
It was good at the start but being married is stupid
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/27/2014
I like your story but it seems to have plot holes
Where did naruto learn all of his ninjutsu. Also a village wouldn't give up a jinchuuriki for a alliance with a village. A marriage maybe but they would live in the jinchuurik's village what did konoha gain in return for the kyuubi. I ddefinitely agree with zabuza on kakashi he seemed way to sharigan reliant
| Awsomeness7 chapter 9 . 7/18/2014
I love it. I liked this fic before, but this chuunin exam nailed it. I'm in love with this fic. There's just so much originality, Naruto is powerful but not overly so, he's also rather stylish. HakuxNaruto is one of my favorite pairing and while I prefer Mei with Naruto, I just like the dynamics of the two senseis and students too much to complain. The character development is perfect, even the oc's are nice. I'm still chuckling over some of the jokes planted throughout this story too. I wish this wasn't on hiatus but I still have more chapters to go so I won't complain. Meanwhile I'll need to find more fics where ninja themselves are portrayed realistically...
| Awsomeness7 chapter 8 . 7/18/2014
Why'd you refer to Jiraiya as an anbu? He never was and with his age he never will be. It was a bit after Naruto accepted his apology I think.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2014
My one complaint is that you use present tense in your writing. That makes it sound wierd.
| Matthias the Wanderer chapter 12 . 4/23/2014
Favorited. I've NEVER seen someone handle the retrieval arc like this, and it's an instant fave, with all I've seen. That makes this the fourth story on a list of over a hundred to get that before I've finished/caught up.
| Matthias the Wanderer chapter 3 . 4/23/2014
Ooh, nice work. It's rare someone comes up with a technique like your Shadow-Water clones and actually have decent trade-offs for it.
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/5/2014
When is the next chapter ?
| MichaelH2544 chapter 16 . 2/26/2014
dude. love ur story. i know its almost been a year sincr your last update. but u should at least try and continue its a great story. Dont give up
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
i think hes actually mid A
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/3/2014
Gaara's realization of danger (in HIS mind): 'That's a lot of water...FUUUUUUCK!' Shukaku's realization of danger (in HIS/HER/IT'S mind): 'WHY DO THEY ALWAYS USE KAMIDAMNED WATER TO HURT ME...FUUUUUCK YOOOOUUU KUUUURRAAAAAMMMAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaa... *ping*'