|Reviews for Kiri's Phantom Blade|
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/20
Your chericters power level cept fluctuateing to much it would go up to being a hi level swordsman of the mist to low jonin throughout the story just made this not good well written but not good
| Ryujin Hakuto chapter 1 . 8/11
well its okay as a dragon why do u read it if u dont like it
| Tony McNucklz chapter 16 . 8/2
hope you come back. I enjoyed reading this.
| Tony McNucklz chapter 15 . 8/2
not a fan of dragon contracts. it's always terrible because... DRAGONS! how does any other beast contract in any way stand a chance against dragons? only by making them the same as regular beasts, and then what's the point of it being a dragon? I think salamander would be good if you could find a way to facilitate it. they'd supplement naruto's water theme with the added poison bonuses being useful facing orochimaru later since it seems like orochi uses them often here. in fact if naruto gets bit often then like a snake trainer that's been bit by snakes naruto could build up a resistance to poison that supplemented by the kyuubi would make orochimaru's poisons less effective on him (not immune since orochimarus snake venom base for his poisons has to be chemically different). only other decent ideas I had are crustacean (massive lobster or crab crushes all plus has armor, and tiny crawdads and shrimp are good spies though only near water), turtle (house sized alligator snapping turtle gets armor shell, claws and limb snapping awesomeness. plus small turtles are good at camoflauge in their proper wet environments and could look like rocks on land, making them decent spies.)
enjoying this story keep it up!
| OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 13 . 11/4/2016
This story was great for the first 6 chapters. These last 7 have been boring and frustrating. It's been nothing but slight canon divergences, power level inconsistencies, character inconsistencies, and Sasuke asspulls.
| amerdism chapter 16 . 3/17/2016
Awesome story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter going up?
| Chrono Phoenix chapter 16 . 10/11/2015
hope you can continue this story someday
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/18/2015
Okay it has been more that 2 YEARS since you last updated. WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!
| random reader chapter 16 . 3/31/2015
Post another chapter ASAP coz things are getting very exciting.
| Aegorm chapter 16 . 3/30/2015
I hate a couple of things in this chapter.
The fact that you think Haku can use/learn Rasenshuriken is idiotic. Naruto demolished his arm multiple time trying to make that jutsu, and it takes HALF of his sage mode chakra, Haku can never hope to use such a jutsu.
Second: Rasengan isn't a jutsu Konoha can give away, the only person who knows how to teach it is Jiraiya... And he went missing nin...
Besides that the mizukage is stupid, letting suigetsu free because his brother was a loyal and heroic ninja? Even tho he tried to attack/kill/steal from your son in law and daughter? Suuuuure... Sorry dude but this story just went downhill, great start, and then it became weaker
| MickDunD chapter 16 . 2/11/2015
I love this story. Please update it.
| Mega Latios 1988 chapter 5 . 12/25/2014
Your story and ideas are good so far. Your language and grammar are fine. Only thing I want to point out is that perhaps you could space things out a bit more. It would make this story a better read. It seems like your plotline is a bit rushed. Otherwise good job on your fic thus far
| Neeehhhh chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
It was good at the start but being married is stupid
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/27/2014
I like your story but it seems to have plot holes
Where did naruto learn all of his ninjutsu. Also a village wouldn't give up a jinchuuriki for a alliance with a village. A marriage maybe but they would live in the jinchuurik's village what did konoha gain in return for the kyuubi. I ddefinitely agree with zabuza on kakashi he seemed way to sharigan reliant
| Awsomeness7 chapter 9 . 7/18/2014
I love it. I liked this fic before, but this chuunin exam nailed it. I'm in love with this fic. There's just so much originality, Naruto is powerful but not overly so, he's also rather stylish. HakuxNaruto is one of my favorite pairing and while I prefer Mei with Naruto, I just like the dynamics of the two senseis and students too much to complain. The character development is perfect, even the oc's are nice. I'm still chuckling over some of the jokes planted throughout this story too. I wish this wasn't on hiatus but I still have more chapters to go so I won't complain. Meanwhile I'll need to find more fics where ninja themselves are portrayed realistically...