Reviews for Curtain of Despair
Jammire chapter 8 . 7/27/2015
Luke pisses me off.
JWLY chapter 8 . 6/24/2015
1.a gods eater cannot wield 2 god arcs at the same would just cause the other arm an aragami infection.
2.a gods eater cannot use another gods eater's god would cause the bias factor to reject the bias factor armlet,and cause again,an aragami infection.
overall,good story,a new chapter would be appreciated.
Melto chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Hair Style 7 hair Style 2 skin color 6 marine summer (TOP) (Bottom) deus GUN BLADE ARMOR X
cubbiebox chapter 7 . 12/29/2012
Wow image being asleep for 3 years you would probably wake up with a "what the fuck happened while i was out." Face.
Xstream-kun chapter 7 . 12/29/2012
Zane,he finally wake uppp!
cubbiebox chapter 6 . 12/28/2012
Heay thare, hows it been 8D (in case you dony know its Rad here-

God 3 years seems to be alo- wait who's taking care of Zane for 3 years? You know, those -cough- -cough- stuff
Akuroi chapter 5 . 7/23/2012
...I'm sorry...but for some reason I'm offended on how you wrote the 14 year olds...when they spoke...what's the word I'm looking for...


I'm 14 and I don't talk like that...neither does anyone I know...maybe it's just me...
JaCk-o'-LaNtErN 91 chapter 5 . 6/1/2012
well all things consider it was a pretty good chapter
cubbiebox chapter 5 . 5/30/2012
D'aww a bit of SomaXKanon fluff. Weird pairing yes but non-less enjoyed.

And wait you did this with one hand? I can't even tyoe property with two hamds! OAO
HikariNoTenshi-San chapter 5 . 5/30/2012
...Hmmm...I wonder how he'll act with his new "parts", so to speak. UPDATE!
Hitsu chapter 4 . 5/20/2012
Kuroki94 chapter 4 . 5/10/2012
Sugoi, i like it went u make alisa worry for her lover.

Good luck
Tempest Shadow chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
they story good but he better not be dead man
Gabriel Helsing chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
I don't know what happened that would have busy for so long, but I hope that you can resolve soon. You got quite a bunch people riled up with cliffhanger you made, you know? :)

Hope to hear from you soon.
HikariNoTenshi-San chapter 4 . 3/24/2012
*Looks at previous update date :02-03-12. Then looks at today's date: 03-24-12*...Methinks it's been more than a week. - Maybe Zane should REALLY devour you, yes? xDDD Come on and update, yea? It's a neat story so far, but I AM wondering why Zane(who seems like the main character of the story along with Alisa at the moment) happened to die right at the beginning. PLEASE UPDATE! xD
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