Reviews for White Knight
Windwaker21 chapter 8 . 10/13
Really like the story. Hope you continue it one day!
reptoholic chapter 8 . 10/2
Fucking loved the chapter, Amazing job.
reptoholic chapter 7 . 10/1
great work
reptoholic chapter 6 . 10/1
Come on, great chapter, but go into more detail when it is the siblings togeher
reptoholic chapter 5 . 10/1
Awesome chapter.
reptoholic chapter 4 . 10/1
Great chapter, love the changes to the original. looking forward to reading more.
reptoholic chapter 3 . 10/1
I hope she becomes the sheath to his sword.
reptoholic chapter 2 . 10/1
HAHAHA, Awesome story so far! Love it.
reptoholic chapter 1 . 10/1
Looks real good, awesome if he had two sets of sister!lol
Anonymous chapter 8 . 9/25
Well, executed strategy to avoid(at least lessen) flames. I too know how to use 'truths', 'half truths' to be exact.

Anyway coming to the review, the lemon is quite good, steamy and erotic, except the part where 5 Ichikas and Chifuyu consummate their love.

That was disgusting
Guest chapter 8 . 8/13
Please wright more chapters to i love it and it would be awesome if ichika got totether with the emperor's daughter because i think she is the closest real person to core 001
rajdiangelo chapter 1 . 7/13
It has been two years so.. It is really hopeless still I hope u update soon
kewllewk chapter 8 . 5/16
Don't be so harsh on yourself, it's just a lemon chapter. Your stories usually have at least heavy sexual overtones, so it's not like it's just out of the blue, and it's hardly pointless smut. Certainly it could be considered filler, since nothing really significant happened(unless you plan on doing something with Ichika in Italy), but filler is an important part of storytelling. If every story was all action all the time, it would get boring incredibly fast. You have to have lows to contrast the highs or it's all just mellow regardless of how intense it is.
rc48177 chapter 4 . 5/8
This shit is GOOD!
Moot Point chapter 8 . 4/30
Your writing is good either way. It combined humor with romance effectively whether it is behind doors or openly in view.

I would kill to have such skill.
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