Reviews for White Knight
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12
This is awesome!
Ruberforumfree chapter 8 . 2/10
Well, I liked the Lemon! I just hope that you will continue to write this.
WotTheHeck chapter 2 . 10/20/2017
'A monster can never look that beautiful.'

*Elfen Lied is triggered*
martin.mahendra2301 chapter 8 . 9/10/2017
I hope that one day you would come back to this cause this is really good and would be a shame to leave it unfinishe
the souless knight chapter 8 . 6/29/2017
A pity that you have dropped this story
ichigo chapter 4 . 5/13/2017
fucking onee-sama scene.. where's the fucking onee-sama scene?! you said there's heavy incest. goddamn liar!
ashfallen1 chapter 8 . 2/26/2017
Man, be easier on yourselves. This story is good, one of the best about IS. Chapter 8 is godlike for lemon lovers
98kazer chapter 8 . 2/6/2017
Painful is right, you don't know how painful it is to hold your boner in class.
Do you make other lemon fanfics?
I need it for... Research
BrotherCaptainSheperd chapter 8 . 1/16/2017
Honestly, I dont see wats so bad. Its not like he took her without permission. Oh and having a harem would solve most of his current problems (along with creating a set of new ones)
Biblio388 chapter 8 . 12/3/2016
There does seem to be a theme to this chapter but I am not sure if it deserves all the scorn you are giving it. The citrus is much more in-you-face than previously but the other content of the chapter still gives us a peek into the characters involved. Some interesting concepts are used or revealed, might want to see them expanded upon in later chapters.
Biblio388 chapter 5 . 12/3/2016
Jeez, I can almost imagine this as a fight over a favored chew toy. Can almost picture them tugging on it from all directions, just remains to be seen if they break something or someone takes it.
Biblio388 chapter 3 . 12/3/2016
I have to say that this is certainly a crazy trip. Seeing how everyone seems to react to him is hilarious and just the way the females he knows now are acting is making me laugh about when he meets more.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/28/2016
That was incredibly long, but REALLY With the fantasy of '9 inch' 10 yr old Ichika?
freddy.lane.1 chapter 8 . 8/30/2016
god damn, i never thought i would read something so...damn...KINKY! tangina ang hirap controlin si junior! Tumigas siya tuloy!
luissz chapter 8 . 8/29/2016
I really hope you didn't stop writing this incredible story because you don't like how the last chapter turned out. The chapter was fine, maybe a bit too much sex, but nothing to get worked up over. I doubt you'll read any of this considering its been like 3 years since you updated, but I think you're a wonderful author. I can see you're serious about your work since you tend to be harsh on yourself when you believe you didn't do well enough, this is an admirable quality but taken to an extreme it can cause you to be discouraged easily. So to make a point in all this rambling, I hope you return to this story and share some more of your talent with us.
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