| Reviews for New Developments |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 12/13/2022 That man ain't unconscious... he dead |
 Jpx0999 chapter 9 . 12/11/2022 gero was a genius,and since he had a soo many ways of spying on son goku i doubt he wount piece together it was not hercule who defeated cell |
| JannaKalderash chapter 3 . 10/28/2022 Chichi is an abusive mother. I don't care if Gohan is tougher than a regular human; she doesn't have the right to hit him with a frying pan. |
| Myth0s chapter 3 . 10/4/2022 "The look in every girl's eye was of uncontrolled lust." Well... your Story takes place 3 years after Cell, so those girls are like 12/13 years old. So wtf? |
| Ohma chapter 1 . 3/22/2022 I was actually disappointed of the quality of the writing, thankfully I actually just mistook you for another writer. |
| Ohma chapter 7 . 3/22/2022 there's just so many wrong in this fic, I can't stomach it. dropped. |
| Ohma chapter 6 . 3/22/2022 Mercenary Tao only ever worked for RR once...he got his ass almost killed and days later RR fell. That's just wrong info. |
| Ohma chapter 6 . 3/22/2022 This Gohan is by far the worse you've written. he's got zero charms, he's a dick and a Mary Sue. he's no different to Sharpener, how Videl's supposed to fall for him is plain mystery. |
| Ohma chapter 4 . 3/22/2022 This is fucking bullshit |
| Ohma chapter 4 . 3/22/2022 Yeah how the hell is Gohan stronger he hasn't trained in years, you made him an even bigger Mary Sue |
| Ohma chapter 5 . 3/22/2022 your* |
| Ohma chapter 5 . 3/22/2022 you're Gohan's kind of a dick |
| Ohma chapter 2 . 3/22/2022 In all your stories that I've read, you always use "sparing" instead of "sparring"... can't believe no one's ever pointed that out in the reviews |
| gabelou1991 chapter 9 . 12/4/2021 J'aime beaucoup. |
| ZeroExia chapter 9 . 6/27/2021 Love the twist and turns I can’t believe I just found this story today |