Reviews for New Developments
Guest chapter 5 . 12/13/2022
That man ain't unconscious... he dead
Jpx0999 chapter 9 . 12/11/2022
gero was a genius,and since he had a soo many ways of spying on son goku i doubt he wount piece together it was not hercule who defeated cell
JannaKalderash chapter 3 . 10/28/2022
Chichi is an abusive mother. I don't care if Gohan is tougher than a regular human; she doesn't have the right to hit him with a frying pan.
Myth0s chapter 3 . 10/4/2022
"The look in every girl's eye was of uncontrolled lust." Well... your Story takes place 3 years after Cell, so those girls are like 12/13 years old. So wtf?
Ohma chapter 1 . 3/22/2022
I was actually disappointed of the quality of the writing, thankfully I actually just mistook you for another writer.
Ohma chapter 7 . 3/22/2022
there's just so many wrong in this fic, I can't stomach it.

Ohma chapter 6 . 3/22/2022
Mercenary Tao only ever worked for RR once...he got his ass almost killed and days later RR fell.

That's just wrong info.
Ohma chapter 6 . 3/22/2022
This Gohan is by far the worse you've written.

he's got zero charms, he's a dick and a Mary Sue.

he's no different to Sharpener, how Videl's supposed to fall for him is plain mystery.
Ohma chapter 4 . 3/22/2022
This is fucking bullshit
Ohma chapter 4 . 3/22/2022
Yeah how the hell is Gohan stronger he hasn't trained in years, you made him an even bigger Mary Sue
Ohma chapter 5 . 3/22/2022
Ohma chapter 5 . 3/22/2022
you're Gohan's kind of a dick
Ohma chapter 2 . 3/22/2022
In all your stories that I've read, you always use "sparing" instead of "sparring"... can't believe no one's ever pointed that out in the reviews
gabelou1991 chapter 9 . 12/4/2021
J'aime beaucoup.
ZeroExia chapter 9 . 6/27/2021
Love the twist and turns I can’t believe I just found this story today
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