Reviews for To Be Forever There
lalaland33 chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
I absolutely love the twist at the end! I really thought it was Michael despite the characterization but it was a really nice surprise and the story was well-written! Loved it!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
I absolutely loved this piece-the length, the emotions, and the twist at the end. The reader expects the narrator to be Michel, but instead, it is Ian, who has to watch over his elder sister as she struggles to piece together her life. Again, this was absolutely brilliant.
AiDeeKay chapter 1 . 2/17/2012 could anyone NOT write a review for this?

This is...amazing. So eerie. So mysterious. So intimate.

This is amazing. I am about to read your story as soon as I am done with this.

Please keep writing on the ViVaVelde books.