This is an absolutely amazing story! I read the entire thing in one go and I loved it! You're an amazing writer; this plot was fantastic! This story isn't getting enough credit! Thank you so much for posting! :)

Just found your story. Awesome opening chapter. Looking forward to reading the rest.

LOL at the bet

glad you let every member of five-o have their respective piece of action,

very good story!

go kono go!

wow, did chin hit it? or what happened?

count on danny to remember all and help safe the day

count on chin to stay calm and do what's necessary

can danny give the needed info in time or will chin figure it out on his own?

seems like kono has found them. hope it's in time for danny and the sheik

steve not remembering what the bad guys planned, that's bad!

doesn't look good for the two of them right now...

will steve help danny out?

no one thinking about the ship the talks will be on, and a sub with a torpedo, and make the connection?

would agree that steve can get the two of them out of their situtation if not for the fact that he's still unconscious...

starts off with a rather interesting plotline, have me hooked...

really like this story so far

And a very good ending it was to an excellent story.

Great imaginative plot and spot on characterisation. Loved how you portrayed Kono's competence on the island. Delighted to see Danny rescue Steve, then cringed when he needed rescued himself. And way to go Chin! They all got a chance to be heroes and that's how it should be.

I so totally enjoyed this story. Thank you!

Enjoyed the story! Very nice.