Reviews for It's A River
LaueHime chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Amazing hallucifer! Wow I'm very impressed! That was totally creepy and disturbing and so awesome because poor Sammy right?! Your Lucifer is so spot on he gives me the creeps! Wonderful :)
Kaira-chan15 chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
This was a beautifully written and very angsty story. I was drawn in by it and then you evoked my emotions very well. Dean, Sam, and Lucifer were all kept in-character, and I loved the ending. You can tell Sam is starting to break a little. Fantastic job on this!
Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
I know it's just Dean's way of reacting to fear and frustration, but it always pissed me off a bit when he'd get angry with Sam during this timeframe, like if he just tried harder he'd be able to handle it better or cure himself. But in reality Dean was warned up and down how destroyed Sam's soul was and what putting it back could/would do to him. Nothing about Sam's behaviour during the Hallucifer time of of his life was his fault, and not always coming clean to Dean about it was mostly a direct result to Sam's guilt at feeling like a burden and Dean's hostility and aggression. And I'm being ranty because I'm just so sad for Sam because you do Hallucifer so SO well! Poor baby! xo
CorbynPool chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
I noticed that your profile pic was Orochimaru. Are you a Naruto fan? 0_0
criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I don't even know how to respond to this, but it was awesome, that means anything. Brilliantly written and extremely in-character and so amazingly wonderful. It was almost like I was watching scenes from the show, honestly. It was brilliant. Loved it!
AquilaTempestas chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Wow this is great : D

Loved the portrayal, the flow of the dialogue... it seemed very realistic. Would've loved to have seen the show handle it like this.

Aquila
Chjajcjjslakncjska chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Aaargh I love Lucifer. Good story. Funny
SamDeanLove chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Ah! More i have to have More! This is Good! Please hurry up! ;)
itscalledkarma chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Poor Sammy, you can just feel his total despair. Great story please add on!
lilykep chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Great job. I think you showed a very cannon compliant look at what Sam is dealing with every day. They are playing it very subtle on the show, but even the leviathan imitating Sam said poor Sammy was totally crazy flakes. Bravo.
lostwardenfound chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
I friggin LOVE this story. It's exactly what I'm searching for. Your writing style is AWESOME. *v*

And OMG, AuthoressCrest's Review described SO WELL how I feel.:O *claps*

I'd love to know if you wrote more stories like this. *w* About Sam. And lucifer. *_*

haha, I was shocked when I saw how many stories you wrote... *claps again*
AuthoressCrest chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Can I just say... I CANNOT WORDS FORM NOW RIGHT!

Uggggh, this is so wonderful just the way you write Lucifer and his complete mindfuckery, you make me hate and yet love him. I also liked how you portrayed Sam, his confusion when Luci was Dean and saying those hurtful things and Sam sure that it had to be Lucifer but yet still unsure because he'd been with Luci as Dean for so long that it rang true in the back of his mind as something Dean would say. That made me tear up. T_T

This is what I wish the show would give us. I know they can't have Sam completely crazy the entire time but the fact that they want us to believe that he's okay and can function normally is just nuts. I know Jared does these little nuances that help show Sam is still being affected by Hell but I would love to SEE some of these things instead of them inferring but then again that's why there are wonderful fic writers like you!

Sorry for the longish review but I did love this and you are a wonderful writer and I hope to see more from you in the future! :D
Demaris Jones chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Hi Min,

Another fine piece. You have a great ear for dialogue. This was pretty depressing, but I always felt that in canon Sam got over the wall breaking just a little too easily. This fills in the blanks with poignancy but without a lot of treacle. It's grim and provides insight into the real depths of Sam's suffering.

Loved it.

Best regards, Demaris
Dionaea Canis chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Ahh, wonderful, wonderful. I very much appreciate you writing this story. I absolutely loved the introduction in the show the Sam wasn't okay, and the whole fall-back to self-harm really got me feeling Sam was actually affected by his time in Hell. Then they tapered off of that, and I really wanted to see some more.

I believe you've done justice to what the series presented, as well as your own interpretation on it. I believe you're respecting how broken Sam should be with this story (though quite frankly, I wouldn't mind seeing it pushed even farther), and I appreciate that. I think you've captured the essence of the characters, and built on what the show offered in those first couple episodes.

My favourite parts are the Dean with no-eyes scene, the mention of things creeping just on the edge of Sam's awareness, and most of all the recognition that all this torture did happen, and its "just less current." Once again, loved how you did the characters and recognized their attitudes and desires, and their interactions.

And that last line, I have to comment on that. Because you've recongized here that Sam couldn't have been in Hell for those 180 or so years and not grown close to Lucifer, have not accepted him in some way as a part of his life, and how Sam can't simply ignore or supress this. Lucifer's a part of him, and thats what I most appreciate you addressing with this fanfic.

I'll be keeping an eye out, in case you happen to do post any more Sam and Lucifer fics.
Seydrune chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Oh god. I really like how you portray them, seriously, but you're going to tear my heart out (and to say that Lucifer is one of my favourite with Sam, but here I kind of want to punch him, how unexpected is that !). The idea of Lucifer trolling Sam in being another Dean, I actually never thought about it like that, (I mean in a "Hey guess who's the real one" for a day long) and it's really good (if they ever make a Supernatural game there should be a task like this, "you have ten minutes to spot the right Dean !").

Still, I'm not sure if I'm happy because I found a good story with my favourite characters/someone who write nice fics with my favourite characters or if I'm not happy because /Sam/ (you make me want to hug him even more than what I'm used to XD)

So, thanks for the story :D

S.
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