Reviews for Bravery, Loyalty, Intellect, and Caring
katrin lily chapter 11 . 8/16
this is GOOD yes there are some glitches but please keep writing
mattdombast chapter 2 . 6/23
So basically awesome
mattdombast chapter 1 . 6/23
So good
Fallow51 chapter 11 . 6/4
Kudos :)
oscarhan168 chapter 1 . 3/21
Please update soon
wbreeck chapter 2 . 3/16
A couple of problens with this chapter that need to be adressed, one it is hoghly unusual for any wizard or witch to drive anywhere when apperating is much faster not to mention the fact that they don't typically use much muggle technology in the first place, and two only the military or extremely wealthy muggles had access to gps at that period of time so for the two of them to be using a gps isn't possible not only would they not no how to use it they wouldn't have jad the inclination to bother with it because as I previously stated witches and wizards are unfamiliar with muggle technology and science.
Monnbeam chapter 4 . 3/15
You have a great idea for a story which is full of potential but you need to proof read it before you post it or ask somone to do it for you. Your story would be so much better if you got rid of all the silly mistakes. Please fix them and let the full potential of your story be shown
Guest chapter 11 . 3/15
before you rewrite, please spell check :)
ThunderClaw03 chapter 1 . 3/15
Great job keep it up update soon
nightwing27 chapter 9 . 3/15
good thing in my story harry will never get that wand
The Single Fanboy chapter 11 . 3/15
Will it still be on your account or a new one
skyesmommy chapter 10 . 7/21/2014
Any chance of an update? I LOVE this story!
firebolthallow1572 chapter 10 . 5/6/2014
Is story going to be finish at all
moonlight10060 chapter 2 . 1/29/2014
Please. not Mooney, but Moony.
Not repairo but reparo
ar-elenriel chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Other than a few chronological anomalies (e.g. GPS- Harry Potter would have been six in 1987 and we barely had personal computers in 1987 forget about GPS- that was still military grade technology that only the government had access to then) it is a fairly good story
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