Reviews for Trapped from Within
Klaroline Mikealforbes chapter 8 . 9/22
Umm isn't it against the rules to use fanfiction,.net for anything other then fanfiction?
Loki son of Laufey chapter 8 . 7/17
Its great that you are spreading your wings into proffesional literature!
(The novel was astounding, just to let you know.)

I want more of this fic!

And apparently I'm a whiny, silly little person that would drag you away drom your personal successes...
So yeah.

Good luck with your career! And, you know, life in general.

Read you around.
~Loki son of Laufey
Shadow At Midnight chapter 6 . 7/5
Unfortunate that you never continued it, but it was certainly an interesting idea I think. A very interesting idea.
RenegadeFire chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
Wow the story was thrilling and your writing style was really enjoyable to read. It's a shame that you discontinued this but I hope someday in the near future you will come back. It was getting suspenseful aswell D:

Please do come back :(
Guest chapter 7 . 12/29/2012
never like this fic anyway. :x
Guest chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
Are you planning on adding yaoi in this fic? If so, then I am not going to continue reading it. ._.

I think you made Euphie's personality flat and hollow, to the point that I wanted to slap her and smash that stupid plan of hers to the ground ( I love her In the anime). ._.
Burning Souls chapter 6 . 7/15/2012
good story, I really love it
TheMonkCode chapter 3 . 6/7/2012
One of the most original plots out there, really hope it doesn't turn in the 'standard' prince lelouch fic, yet I'm anxious for updates either way.
Elongation chapter 5 . 2/20/2012
Well this is an unexpected and an intersting turn of events.

This story is good, good job and keep writting.
l3largus chapter 6 . 2/18/2012
I'm glad you updated, even if it's a teaser, I'm glad to know that you're not giving up on this story. I'm a little confused with what Lelouch is doing but I guess I'll wait until your next moment of free time.
Wolferrath chapter 6 . 2/14/2012
arrgh the suspense!

Your fanfic is awesome. I don't care about grammar errors, although i should check up on my Hetalia fanfic XD

*ahem* anyways, keep making this story awesome :3
107602 chapter 6 . 2/14/2012
Thank you for the short teaser of a chapter. Good luck with your training and I can't wait to read more once your training is complete. See you next update.
Fountainofroses chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
Can u please update this is a brilliant story and I dislike waiting for so long. Please update soon thank you
SomebodyLost chapter 5 . 2/3/2012
Interesting, but the explosion... was kinda half-assed. Wouldn't Lelouch think farther?
reality deviant chapter 5 . 1/15/2012
great story , amazing idea, nicely done.

kalan-lelouch confrontation will be interesting.

maybe have him chellenge her ideals and devotion to zero?

and what of millie and friends? toot soon to ignore them...

lulu still becholar- the idea of kalan stedfeld as a possible metch-offered by someone importent, is very emusing- especially given their history and background.

and add millie- charlse has multiple wifes, why not lelouch as well?

have him merry kalan AND millie AND some oc...

and what of sayoko?

and jeramiah- upon learning that lelouch and nunally are alive?
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