Reviews for Taking Charge
Rusty chapter 30 . 7/23
Really good story. Unique and well written. Thank you
ASKreader chapter 30 . 1/1
The adults are in charge! Unique story with a few new characters and some neat new plot ideas. I really enjoy GySgt. Samuel Glyphs. Thanks!
kjwatson2 chapter 22 . 9/10/2016
Hermione's mother and father were and are the Grangers. The Lestranges might be her biological parents, but, for all intents and purposes, they were not the mother and father Hermione knew. Yes Hermione may have unresolved feelings and emotions concerning her biological parentage (and heritage), however she still has a mother and father who love her and always have since she (Hermione) came into their lives.
Carolyn chapter 17 . 8/13/2016
Someone has likely posted this already, but I've only just found your work! Anne McCaffrey's Dragonsdawn. Love her books, and your stories!
DarkenedProngs chapter 30 . 4/16/2016
This was awesome! I always wondered why the hell Albus didn't step up and take care of Riddle like he did with Gellert. The muggleborns being descended from squibs is also a theory of mine. This was nicely written, with a good story line. Always a pleasure to find something like this.
digbygreen chapter 30 . 3/29/2016
Great story! Thanks.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 30 . 2/24/2016
While I kinda like your story, it puts too much of the story on the OCs and doesn't leave enough for the original characters to do. Poor Harry gets nothing at all, and Hermione only gets to open the Lestrange vault after her 'Uncle Stan' gives her the key. Not even the adults get to do anything. Remus and Sirius get nothing and Andromeda just babysits Harry.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 29 . 2/24/2016
Love that last line.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 23 . 2/24/2016
Blibbering humdingers sound like bird to me, similar to hummingbirds.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 22 . 2/24/2016
Do all Muggleborns have to be descended from some pureblood? That's so cliche when Hermione (and Lily) are discovered to be "really" purebloods all along.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 20 . 2/24/2016
That's a pretty gruesome way to get a Dark Mark off your arm. Gryffindorish for sure. Surely a Slytherin with plenty of money could think of a more cunning way to do it. Commission a potion to take. Hire goblins to do a ritual. Something. Besides, it doesn't really get rid of the problem, which is that if Voldemort is really coming back then he's going to come after everyone who was disloyal and snuff them.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 19 . 2/24/2016
Hermione knows nothing about wizarding politics. Harry needs to broaden his friendships to include at least Neville.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 17 . 2/24/2016
Acromantulas are valuable animals. They spin silk used in wizarding clothing. They should not be destroyed. They should be moved back to their native habitat of Borneo.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 15 . 2/24/2016
Making Andromeda be the Gryffindor heir is pretty much like pulling a name out of a hat.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 6 . 2/24/2016
Yeah! Snape gets the axe.
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