Reviews for Taking Charge
DarkenedProngs chapter 30 . 4/16
This was awesome! I always wondered why the hell Albus didn't step up and take care of Riddle like he did with Gellert. The muggleborns being descended from squibs is also a theory of mine. This was nicely written, with a good story line. Always a pleasure to find something like this.
digbygreen chapter 30 . 3/29
Great story! Thanks.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 30 . 2/24
While I kinda like your story, it puts too much of the story on the OCs and doesn't leave enough for the original characters to do. Poor Harry gets nothing at all, and Hermione only gets to open the Lestrange vault after her 'Uncle Stan' gives her the key. Not even the adults get to do anything. Remus and Sirius get nothing and Andromeda just babysits Harry.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 29 . 2/24
Love that last line.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 23 . 2/24
Blibbering humdingers sound like bird to me, similar to hummingbirds.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 22 . 2/24
Do all Muggleborns have to be descended from some pureblood? That's so cliche when Hermione (and Lily) are discovered to be "really" purebloods all along.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 20 . 2/24
That's a pretty gruesome way to get a Dark Mark off your arm. Gryffindorish for sure. Surely a Slytherin with plenty of money could think of a more cunning way to do it. Commission a potion to take. Hire goblins to do a ritual. Something. Besides, it doesn't really get rid of the problem, which is that if Voldemort is really coming back then he's going to come after everyone who was disloyal and snuff them.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 19 . 2/24
Hermione knows nothing about wizarding politics. Harry needs to broaden his friendships to include at least Neville.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 17 . 2/24
Acromantulas are valuable animals. They spin silk used in wizarding clothing. They should not be destroyed. They should be moved back to their native habitat of Borneo.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 15 . 2/24
Making Andromeda be the Gryffindor heir is pretty much like pulling a name out of a hat.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 6 . 2/24
Yeah! Snape gets the axe.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 2 . 2/24
I really have to call .t on Harry, Hagrid and Hermione being among the top six in magical power in Harry's first year. Where's Cedric? Where's Flitwick? Where's Tonks?
Heksy chapter 30 . 2/13
What a fabulous story.
Dang, I love Samuel's wit.
"You're in MY house now, BITCH!" - Genius, sheer genius.
Thanks so much for sharing.
senawario chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
nice; some deus ex machina, but very well done
JanusGodOfPossibilities chapter 18 . 10/24/2015
Excellent chapter. 4,000/10

Any chance for an added scene to this chapter with the Founders watching the events of the scene with Andromeda?
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