Reviews for Deal Breaker
ThisisAlivia chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
THANK YOO! It was so sad, especially the last part, bad I loved it, gurl! :)
Plurimisverbis chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Short - packed with stuff though - and very poignant.

Really liked the clash of conscious/sub-conscious for both of them.

Well done!
DD Agent chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
This was so sweet, and yet so sad. Great job!
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Oh, dear D:

How do you make a 300-word fic so sad? Haha.

It's kinda sad, how she made her decision. The part about his not whispering Kelly's name in his sleep anymore; that broke my heart.

I wish things had turned out better for them.

It's a good story :)


P.S. Livvy! I love Livvy. I miss Livvy :(
IMSLES chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Very insightful. I wonder how much she might've regretted sticking to her 'plan' in the end.