Reviews for Two Shots
olihmajor chapter 7 . 10/18/2012
Deep... I really liked that knife edge metaphor. Also, Sleipnir. Spider pony!
Trar chapter 6 . 5/5/2012
Pretty good story. I wish you'd update this.
ShadowWolf203027 chapter 6 . 12/29/2011
Cliff hanger. Dang.

Please update soon.

olihmajor chapter 6 . 12/29/2011
The journal in this chapter was an especially good one. The complaining pain part was original, too :P

"I'm not whining, I am complaining!"
olihmajor chapter 5 . 12/29/2011
Wow, good. The sort of cliche descriptions usually associated with explosions weren't here. Great! :D
ShadowWolf203027 chapter 4 . 12/25/2011
Wow. This is really good. Ive never played the game but Im starting to seriously think about it.


Update soon.

olihmajor chapter 4 . 12/23/2011
OOO~ BOMB. Nice :D I liked this one's journal especially, showing how the runner test really tied in to the fight. The metaphors in this were great too. Unconsciousville XD
olihmajor chapter 3 . 12/22/2011
Red red red~ This was good. Short, but good. Kinda has a poised air about it too _
olihmajor chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
Yeah, the journals are cool. The running was pretty well described, and all that. I have no idea what Mirror's Edge is... but awesome so far _;
olihmajor chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
I know what your brand new approach to this story is... But only cause you've told me XD This is interesting, so far. It's kinda vague, but I can still see what's happening :D