Reviews for Magic's Touch
Tayhlia chapter 29 . 10/18
I will admit the ending did feel a little rushed but overall it was a great story. Your writing is amazing (not as if I didn't already know that) Don't think I can make it through Lyrium's Hold tonight but this was fun to reread and actually be able to review this time! :P
Tayhlia chapter 28 . 10/18
Lol lovely distraction technique.
Tayhlia chapter 27 . 10/18
I am so bright red now I probably match a strawberry. That was a very hot scene. I loved the conversation after though. Was very moving.
Tayhlia chapter 26 . 10/18
Okay so you know how I told you about that story that Hatse and I wrote that was almost identical. I have one that is almost identical to what Fenris shouted here to your Hawke about how it felt to be with Danarius. Totally buried on my external harddrive somewhere from my old computer.
Great and moving scene btw. Intense.
Tayhlia chapter 25 . 10/18
I always wished there was a bitchslap option to attack Varania. Hated that woman for betraying Fenris like she did.
Tayhlia chapter 24 . 10/18
Isabela hath returneded
Tayhlia chapter 23 . 10/18
Ggrrr. Foulness. Not the writing just the actions.
Tayhlia chapter 22 . 10/18
LMAO! "That when I see a blue light I think ooh shiny" I just about died of laughter.
Tayhlia chapter 21 . 10/18
:..( Geeze you know how to break a heart after making someone blush.
Tayhlia chapter 20 . 10/18
LOL. Throwing Fenris a birthday party. And Anders outed himself as an
Tayhlia chapter 19 . 10/18
Lol subtle Fenris. Real subtle there.
Tayhlia chapter 18 . 10/18
Lmao the noble reported him for eating people.
Tayhlia chapter 17 . 10/18
I like your description of the markings and the healing thing.
Tayhlia chapter 16 . 10/18
Lmao. I'm not sure what was more entertaining, drunk Fenris or the lies Hawke came up with to get the noble to go away.
Tayhlia chapter 15 . 10/18
Eeks! Fenris!
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