Reviews for the last of us 1
Woodland123 chapter 1 . 4/12
Nice :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Great even though not hentia great story it is also a good game !
LastOfUs chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
This is from a trailer isn't it lol
guset chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
COOL STORY THX FOR INCULDING JOEL!
jordan chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
wow really good keep it up! just fix the errors
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
What does this have to do with Zoombinis?
CU Administration chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Hi there. This doesn't have anything to do with the fandom Zoombinis. I suggest you move this to the correct fandom or if it's original work, to fiction press because this is not the right place for it.

Signed,
DarkSacredJewelXoX
[Founder of Critics United]
N. Harmonik chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
What does this have to do with Zoombinis?
Daniyell37 chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
I can't wait for the game to come out and for there to be more stories about it :D