Reviews for A Dove's Cry
Guest chapter 19 . 11/7/2020
Screw Rose the b...
1avidfan chapter 22 . 8/15/2020
This is really a great story. Did Bella confess everything to Charlie? The fact that she killed Jimmy? I know he is a police chief, but I can’t imagine he wouldn’t support Bella and help her keep the secret. I am sure he would have wanted to kill the guy himself.
Xanthuis chapter 2 . 7/10/2019
So far so good like the overall concept with Edward and Alice real siblings
FireFlower77 chapter 6 . 3/4/2019
why would they drive all the way south to Olympia and then north again...? it would be soooòoo much easier to take a ferry from Kingston to Edmonds and then just a bit south to Seattle...
FireFlower77 chapter 6 . 2/24/2019
not really that many thunderstorms... rain is constant during fall and winter but it's mostly on the lazier side... I should know... lived there for a decade...
FireFlower77 chapter 2 . 2/24/2019
how can it be they were both in foster care and together for a time before being separated... and then you say four years? make up your mind plz.
FireFlower77 chapter 2 . 2/24/2019
how is she in foster care for 6 years and be 17? she mentioned Edward ... so it was Alice, this ali pixie... it doesn't add up if Edward said previously THEY were back from university for Xmas break... he doesn't say HIM... he used plural...

if in deed they both are in university like Edward said then she'd be over the age to be in foster care... even if they were separated and Edward is a sort of new-ish vamp with the Cullen...
FireFlower77 chapter 1 . 2/24/2019
At the beginning I thought James... but then... the condescending tone in that phrase... Aro. (...?)
MyladyNancy chapter 36 . 9/3/2018
thank you for sharing such a good story
MyladyNancy chapter 9 . 8/29/2018
all the time line is not making sense to me.
Noble Korhedron chapter 36 . 7/28/2018
I've been clearing out old emails and found this; I think I'll put it in a separate folder, of old fics to re-read; my general 'Bookmarks' one is ridiculously full! :-D
suziq968 chapter 9 . 10/31/2017
Seriously, you've built this whole story but you're just confused or changing it now? Five years you said she was missing and then he says she was six and he was seven? Earlier I could've sworn you said they were both at the funeral but I'm not going looking. If this doesn't resolve itself I'll have to stop reading which will suck.
suziq968 chapter 6 . 10/31/2017
This has been so hard to read. Abuse stories always are, but I'm glad I stuck with it. It's kinda like mini therapy, or masochism. Anyway, I'm hoping things will be easier now they've met. Of course, you'll have to deal with Alice and what happened to her but the creeping of Edward should be an entertaining interlude.
soonbefound chapter 36 . 9/13/2017
very good, I loved
MiaLuthor chapter 36 . 7/15/2017
Thank you for your generosity in writing and sharing your story. Many twists and turns. You did an especially great job considering you lost an editor/partner during the story.
Thanks again, Mia
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