|Reviews for Dragon at Heart|
| LillyBees chapter 35 . 3/8
I love this fic; update soon!
| Miyana26 chapter 35 . 3/3
Your story is really quite interesting! I read all 35 chapters in a DAY! Imagine that! . Anyways, please update as soon as you possible can! Thank you!
| sarsha008 chapter 35 . 2/5
now i really cant wait to see what happens next! plez update soon! :D
| sarsha008 chapter 24 . 2/4
ok, i realize i have been a bit of a jerk for waiting until i was this far into the story before reviewing... BUT that in in no way shape or form my fault... its actually yours :) i am sooooo in love with this story that literary EVERY spare second i have is spent with me, sitting in front of the computer reading this. ive ignored my homework, friends and family ever since i started. So please take my lack of reviews as a compliment because it is :) i love you and your writing! the idea of Zuko involved with the dragon and having a hidden power that Lord Asshole and his sister cant touch is beautiful! (and something i look for in all Avatar fanfics i read) im hopeing... a LOT (like begging any and all spirits who will listen to my blah) that Zuko will face his father and shove some lightning at him like in the cartoon ;) and pleeeeaaazzz have a big brother/little sis relationship between Zuko and Toph! keep up the fanfuckintastic work! Luv, Sarsha :D
| too-much-inspiration chapter 35 . 1/27
Nice plot and great story so far. The only flaws I can find are the occasional grammatical bug and typo. The characters are nicely written, and the premise is quite original. I am looking forward to seeing how far off canon this is going to go in Season 2 at the rate this story has been slowly breaking away from canon so far. Thank you for writing and posting this!
| JC chapter 35 . 1/26
This is a Excellent story,You must Update soon.
| Guest chapter 35 . 1/25
...cruelty, thy name is gemini...
| 6b chapter 35 . 1/25
| wolfsblood13 chapter 35 . 1/20
Love the story hope you update soon.
| SilverFlame of the Forest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
*raises hands in surrender* Okay, you officially hooked me on this. I was looking for such a fic for a long time and then- BAM! and I stumble on it. Anyway, I'm burning in curiousty! *reads on*
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/30/2013
| Shimmer712 chapter 35 . 12/19/2013
I forget, does Zuko know the fish in the pond are the Moon and Ocean Spirits at this point? I f he does, just make some sort of bowl (maybe cut out a block of ice and melt a hollow into it) and use to the carry the Spirits and just hide away from Zhao. Imagine Zhao coming in, prepared to carry out his "Grand Destiny"... only the Moon Spirit isn't there. Or there are a pair of different fish and Zhao thinks he killed the moon only for nothing to happen.
Actually, can you write an Omake for that? I doubt you'll put it in the actual story.
| Shimmer712 chapter 35 . 12/19/2013
So Katara is basically saying Spirits as a rule care about humans? That they're existence is all about humans? If I were a Spirit, I would be pretty insulted. Which, given that as a non-human, I would respond differently than my human self, could be pretty bad for her.
Please have a spirit correct Katara on this matter. I mean, we see proof in the show itself. Tui and La seem to be fond of humans as far a spirits go, giving that they choose to live in mortal world with a human settlement around them and what did they do when the Fire Nation attacked the North Pole? Nothing. Until the Moon Spirit was killed. Then La got pissed. And given that those two are Great Spirits, and able to give humans the ability to control an element, you can't tell me they couldn't have done anything.
| Kelana-ti chapter 35 . 12/2/2013
This story is so cool!
Loving Zuko's many alter egos. :D Those are always fun to play with. Like how you write Kulo/Zuko, and make his behavior very much that of a dragon.
Poor Zuko fell into the Spirit Oasis! Gah, I kinda panicked, but it was also kinda funny.
Worried about the whole Zhao situation.
| mountainelements chapter 35 . 12/2/2013
I like how unique Zuko's powers are here. It's great how you've managed to stray so far from canon. Please keep it up. :) That said, I hope that Katara's attitude is adjusted soon. She actually hasn't encountered Zuko very often here when compared to canon though their first meeting definitely would have left a negative impression on her. It's just very wearing to read.