|Reviews for The Little Merman|
| RiceCakesWithStyle chapter 10 . 4/2/2017
I am so in love with the fact that the author just went "Yeah, this work is abandoned, what can I say? Sorry?" I did find the little differences that were implemented in interesting, but the plot feels a little bit rushed. I understand it's following the Disney version but it feels like: "WE GOTTA GET THESE GUYS OUT OF THE WATER. Ah, now that they're with their soon-to-be husbands let's just slow it down a little." I guess I just feel that the general lore of the underwater kingdom could have been explored more (since there was a lot of backstory in the beginning).
Oh yes, and that one review had me in hysterics. I like how the reviewer felt that they could outwardly insult her to get an update. That would be like me sending a letter to Nintendo saying: "Hey, where's the next Metroid, you spanners? LOOK AT THE CLOCKS IT'S 2017!111"
| Alicia chapter 9 . 8/7/2016
I know it's been three years but please update this
| Your a bitch chapter 9 . 2/8/2015
I thought you were going to finish the fucking story and I think your statement was right, you updated this in 2011. Well check the clocks! IT FUCKING 2015!
| xXBlack ButlerXx chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
Love your story. Can't wait 4 more .
| neko1998 chapter 9 . 7/26/2013
This is soo exciting! I know Alfred is. Too bad Artie doesn't think he's the one, ooh the agony TT ne, is there any upcoming lemon? Or rivalvry? Sorry bout the questions... Um update soon!
| nekolover3 chapter 9 . 7/12/2013
| Collection chapter 9 . 1/30/2013
IT'S ALIVE! I'm so happy that you'll continue this! x3 I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
| Dolly Doodle chapter 9 . 1/25/2013
It's okay I'll wait. *Sits patiently while smiling happily*
| Shadow-the-Knight chapter 9 . 1/25/2013
Yay I can't wait to see what you come up with
| Savy15012 chapter 9 . 1/25/2013
Yay! Glad to see this is not dead! :D
| SlifofinaDragon chapter 9 . 1/25/2013
| TheWeaverofWorlds chapter 8 . 11/20/2012
I waited to get to the end before reviewing...this is simply amazing, it's so creative how each character gets their main trait taken from them, after all Alfred's was the most obvious one, but for Romano and Matthew you really went the extra mile. The creepy merchildren were described in a way that really freaked me out. I hope the merpeople can get the humans to kiss their lovers! I noticed it's been a while since you updated...why is that? This is a fabulous story, but it needs an ending, a conclusion. You can't just leave us hanging..well i suppose you could, but you shouldn't it's IMMORAL...well kinda...please for the sake of all that is HOLY ROMAN EMPIRE update this! Pretty please with mochi on top..or anything really, if you don't like mochi choose something else. The point is this needs another chapter, and another one after that until it is completed. Or else i will have to send Francis/Ursula after you..and we don't want that...do we...
| BookBird1497 chapter 8 . 9/21/2012
Love it! Please update soon so I may keep reading! Vee
| BookBird1497 chapter 6 . 9/21/2012
AMAZING! My three favorite pairings and one of my favorite Disney movies, I LOVE YOU! XD
| crazyanimelover98 chapter 8 . 8/16/2012
This story is great! I love how you merge the elements of the disney movie, but still keep this it's own story. You even fit the songs in there without actuly having them sing! I mean "Bastard you got stuff aplenty. I think about twenty thingamabobs." from chapter 4? Geniouse XD. I really love this chapter with the way everyone hits it off great. I hope you get back to this story soon. It looks like you haven't been on in a while.