Reviews for Summer with the Marauders
A nice fan chapter 7 . 6/20/2016
Sirius: Jaaaaameees! Reeeeeeeeemus!
James/Remus: WHAT?!
Sirius: I'm BOOOORED! We have been on this plane for ages!
James: No, it's been a few days... but I know what you mean. Its beginnig to get boring
Remus: Be patuent guys maby we just did'nt talk too the writer enaugh?
Sirius: Jeah... thats exsaktly what we did... she's just lazy!
Remus: hey! Stop insulting! I think she is absolutly lovely
James/Sirius: WOAH! WAAAAY TOO CHEESY MOONY!
Remus: What ever
Peter: I still think that I should be in this story!
James/Sirius/Remus/Me: Yeah! But we dont... So piss off!
Peter: Well... then I drop out of this group!
Sirius: Good we'll stop calling you wormtail...
James: Guys... Lets talk about the important things!
Sirius: I know what we can do!
Remus: what?
Sirius/James: CHARM! COMPLIMENTS! PLAN A!
R: You my lovely writer looks good!
S; yeah you're a god in bikini!
J: we looooove your writing
R: we looove you!
J: If I did'nt have Lily I would have married you!
R: Man prongs that was a good one!
S:Yeah!
J: I know, i'm pro!
People on the plane: glaaring weard at them shushing them and some of the girls just glaring
J/S:( shooting flirty smiles)
R: You guys... dont doo that
S: Yeah, we'll stop now, just write more!
J/R: WRITE YOUR BEUTY HIGNESS!
some nice girl chapter 7 . 6/17/2016
Sirius: "Phhhh-leeeees write more! I wanna know if i get to snog that beutifull girl some more!"
James: "Shut up! If you talk like that, she might reconsider getting me and Lily marryed!"
Sirius: "Yeah, cause that's all you think about! Lily Lily Lily I'm getting sick of all that! YOU CAN SHUT UP!"
Remus: "stop it guys! We're still in an airplane! Pepole can hear you"
Peter: "Hey! Why aint I in this story?"
Sirius: "Because you're LAAAAAAAME! Nobody wants to read about you! They want to read about the handsome Black! And James I guess..."
Remus: "What about me, and how did Pete get in here anywhay?"
Me: "Its my imagination DUHHHHH!"
James: "What ever! Just write more! I want to know if I get to marry Lily!"
Brook chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Can you please update? please? Please please? Please please please? Please please please please?!

Write on,
Brook
Anonymous chapter 5 . 8/19/2012
So far all of the Marauders that are there and Lily are my favorite. Mel I like her to but she isn't my favorite. Carla is my least favorite. You know what Lily said about here. Well... I agree with her. Yeah, sorry if that is offending or something. Update soon!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/19/2012
Hey Megan. Just read chapter seven for Summer with the Marauders and i thought it was quite good. You're right - it is VERY short! Maybe in the next chapter you go have them land - describe all of the things that happened on the plane etc.. The boys and girls meet up - then the boys get lost and have to be rescued by the girls - because it is a big airport! Might tarnish Sirius' big head slightly! ;) That would be funny to read, I'm sure! Then show them arriving at the villa after a very long car drive TOGETHER! How bout it? Just a suggestion. Make it a long chapter to make up for the lost space on this chapter. You know I'm not a big fan of short chapters. But otherwise it was good. I think I saw one or two typos but nothing major, I think.
Personally I think you should continue with this one and the new one that you have started - as you can probably tell those two are my favourites and I think they also have the most interesting plots - not that your other ones aren't good, it's just they are slightly all the same, whereas these ones are different.
Can't wait for a next update! Oh and by the way, I've got an account on Pottermore - since my other friends have literally been bugging me to get an account seeing as I won't get facebook or twitter.
Anyways, speak to you soon. Nearly finished my own story - yay! The first one that I've finished. I'm about half way through chapter ten of fifteen! Wwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooo oooooooooooo!
Love,
Bekah
xxx
scottytaylor2012 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Some of the best work I have read
skrowley chapter 7 . 6/7/2012
Well, it was nice to hear from you again! Happy writing! :)
Julimeg chapter 7 . 6/4/2012
Yeah... 5 months... That's a long time and I should probably be furious with you... But you updated and that somehow managed to fix my sadness! :) Please don't wait ANOTHER 5 months to update and please update soon! :)

Julimeg:)
AmazingWingedGirl chapter 7 . 6/3/2012
hey! I was too lazy to log in...but im so happy youre working on this story again! cant wait for the next chapter :)
LunaBeth203 chapter 7 . 6/3/2012
Hi! I'm so glad you have updated and although it is a little bit short it's better than nothing! I will email you some ideas or something when I get the time but my mum is in hospital and I am revising for a maths GCSE at the moment so it may take a while.
Casey713 chapter 7 . 6/3/2012
i really liked the way they all reacted to flying, it was hilarious. sometimes short chapters are good, so don't worry. if it makes you feel any better, we have exams too. but year 8, so you know, no pressure. you would be in year nine if you're 15? maybe they could get off the plane and they'd all be like "that was the worst fucking time of my life" except for or James who, after leaving the plane, decided that that was the best thing he'd ever done, except snog Lily of course. I probably should have PM'd some of that but wth. Also, if they don't like planes how are they going to react to the rides? will there be WWoHP?

love the story

:)
Ranma's girl1 chapter 4 . 6/2/2012
Ok so far I have enjoyed the fic the only thing wrong is the ipod. Sadly back in the 70s there were no ipods sniffsniff we did have cassette tapes and it was better then 8 tracks and you couldn't pack a record and player around with you lol. One thing to keep in mind is research since the music and things you love now may not have been around back in 77. As for them they seem good personality wise although from what JKR says about Lily in a interview she is not such a goody two shoes. She said she had gotten many warnings about using magic at home while under age. most make her out to be so angry and dull. The girl needs to be more spicy as Slughorn said she always gave him such cheeky answers. I see her as being a lot more open and sneaky so that she doesn't get caught doing something wrong.

As for airplanes. I had only been on two a small four seater and I had loved it and then once on a commercial plane and if I ever do it again it'll be first class since coach sucks its to crowded and hot with NO leg room and I'm not tall and having the dork flip his seat all the way back so he was laying in my lap was not impressive. other wise I had not gotten sick or freaked out just to warm and cramp. have fun writing I shall go one to readig more and who knows I might review again... no promises.
Casey713 chapter 4 . 6/2/2012
the Potter timeline is set so when Lily and James were 16 there wouldn't have been iPods you know.. but this is fan fiction you can do what ever the hell you want. i love aeroplanes they're fun as. even the word aero is cool. i love the bold bit at the bottom that sort of stuff goes through my head all the time. :)
wrenthewriter chapter 7 . 6/2/2012
Just keep writing no matter how long it takes! Chapter was adorable :D

xx
Casey713 chapter 2 . 6/2/2012
LOL
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