Reviews for Daughter of the Labyrinth
Definitely-Beautiful chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Just so you know, 'adult situations', meaning M-rated fiction, pertains to rape/abuse as well. You need to increase your rating. It's good that you included that at the very beginning of the story, but the rating is incorrect.
pitchblackforever chapter 24 . 2/6/2014
that was really beautiful.
LabrynthQueen1 chapter 24 . 6/17/2013
I loved your story and cannot wait to read more work from you...and I agree with what you are saying about the whole pulling such a stupid stunt. If there is anyway I can help let me know. :)
Christina salvatore chapter 18 . 4/17/2013
I love the goblins LOL their just hilarious
Christina salvatore chapter 7 . 4/17/2013
I have an Idea too but like Hoggle I don't like it but yes this is good
Christina salvatore chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
oh no SARAH! (facepalm) every time you wish something it gets you into trouble
mello-chan91 chapter 9 . 11/10/2012
oh man..Francine reminds me of my step-grandmother..uhg..(Д)︵/(. . \)
menolikee chapter 11 . 10/30/2012
i olve didymus, 'i am sir didymus, and i am your doom' haha
GeorgeTobor chapter 24 . 7/31/2012
Some of the Mature Content is childish smut.

This has been a great fic. It seems unfinished though.

And I'm hoping FFN is just going through a phase.
GeorgeTobor chapter 21 . 7/31/2012
Jareth acts like a clueless guy too some.
GeorgeTobor chapter 20 . 7/31/2012
Your Sarah is just a bit stubborn. Fortunately she is smarter than the family she married into.
GeorgeTobor chapter 19 . 7/31/2012
I'm very happy you dumped her in the bog and Jareth is making sense.

But my solution is best, just kill the evil idiots.

Put them in the middle of a desert, death by starvation and dehydration, slow and painful...

And yes I'm not all that "good".
GeorgeTobor chapter 12 . 7/31/2012
Forget the bog just drop them in the middle of the ocean, they will drown.
GeorgeTobor chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
Very good conflict!

But I still think dropping them in the Bog of Eternal Stench would be better.
GeorgeTobor chapter 9 . 7/31/2012
The entire family is EVIL!

Which is ok as long as you make sure they suffer...
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