Reviews for A Brother's Obsession
Guest chapter 15 . 4/25
Type your review here. Awsome story bt wish it dint end
Oopsadaze chapter 15 . 3/17
So, you actually left us with a major cliff hanger and it's been almost a year since you updated. Please update soon. To leave the story unfinished is just cruel. Don't listen to all the naysayers. If they don't like the subject matter, they don't have to read.
niamhzoe chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Okay, so I get that the concept of the story is dark. That's great. But you have to approach it with a bit of wariness and most definitely with respect. Plus, you have to understand what you're writing. I also advise that you put a warning on some of your chapters. They could trigger some people. Lastly, I'd review some of your grammatical errors and think wisely when writing such a twisted story. But props to you for trying. The concept could be great if it was delivered just a little bit better.
KDMCAM chapter 15 . 9/14/2015
You could make it turn out that Renee cheated on Charlie & Bella isn't really his daughter.
WB Crazy chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
Shouldn't Charlie have had some type of reaction to Edwards behavior when she tried to go to Phoenix?
jk chapter 15 . 8/29/2015
I figured theyd be like step brother and sister and your tpical bella Edward...nope!
this story is just wrong!
Edwards a freaking adult too! gross creeper should be in jail he freakin touched his sister!
arrest his ass!
snowiewolf chapter 15 . 6/13/2015
I hope you can keep the Bella x Edward thing going their my favorite couple and I tend to not read stories that don't have them coupled together I can't wait for the next chapter I hope you post one soon
melissamary55 chapter 15 . 6/11/2015
great chapter and alice cant keep her mouth shut she is so informative all the time
Guest chapter 4 . 6/9/2015
This is nonsense! It's obviously written by a very young person who still think drugs, drinking and forced acts of sex are cool. It's not! And the grammatical errors are ridiculous! It seems like a decent story idea but it's so immature and poorly written that it's just to difficult to read
barbiedoll123 chapter 15 . 6/9/2015
oh man i can't wait for more
tvd1992 chapter 15 . 6/9/2015
well I'm so confused it been so long since you last update so it look like I have to go back and read it again but thanks for the new chapter
pinky3561 chapter 15 . 6/8/2015
Are you going to finish I will possession your heart also
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Not a bad start
tmcash2274 chapter 14 . 6/5/2015
I just started reading your story and am really enjoying it. I hope you decide to continue writing it.
Lilya chapter 14 . 6/3/2015
Hi,i just wanted to give you an idea for the story so here it is:Edward could discover that he was in fact adopted so he wouldn't really be Bella's brother. Well,i hope it will help you find a way to go on with your story without feeling uncomfortable. Hope to read you soon
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