Reviews for before their meeting
JasmineHoran chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
"wow she's gorgeous I wonder who she is wait what the hell is she doing with my cloak"
loved this line!
minamurra chapter 7 . 10/13/2013
minamurra chapter 10 . 10/11/2013
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Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 10 . 1/20/2013
Getting better. :) Keep up. ;)
a-little-crazy-is-good-for-you chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 8 . 10/1/2012
HI! good chap. I know I sound like a total jerk right now, but I don't mean to.

u see, the story is going a little too fast. by that i mean every chapter. you see, u need to describe the settings. for example: "The wind bristled past her hair as she walked down the hill, vanishing into the sunset".

I Know i sound like a jerk but i am trying to help.
Alyssa chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
Love it! Maybe you could write about a giant ol(Okay, I just watched about a giant ol :)) and Mickaela reading the ol's mind to see what it is about to do... yeah. Lalala. 3
Daisyline chapter 7 . 8/4/2012
Lion and dragon?
My friend is ranga.
I dot see what peoples problem with red heads is but anyway.
Good work((
Daisyline chapter 6 . 8/4/2012
Hey, awesome job(;
Lol. I really liked that...
I'll read the next chapter now
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 7 . 8/3/2012
Good job in using that:D
I Loved wizards of waverly place:)
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 6 . 7/25/2012
very good:)
short but good.
I'll let u know if i got any ideas:)

as always, write more please

love ya;)
Alyssa chapter 5 . 7/21/2012
This is such a fascinating story!
Daisyline chapter 5 . 7/9/2012
Your definetly getting better with your writing
Keep up the good work(;
And thanks(:
Love Daisyline
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 5 . 7/9/2012
Very good my friend!;)
I think u write a little to rushed though... It's either that or i just need to eat... But I think u can use a little description.
The story is great without it though:)

I luv pikachu too;)
In fact I used to have a Pikachu poster... We Pikachu luvers are awesome:)
Daisyline chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
It's me redsparrow3, but I finally got my own account
I thought that was cute:)
Maybe they can go into the dark and all the animals gang up on gorl?
Or maybe lief and barda can get knocked out and it's up to the girls to get the gem
I don't know
These are bad ideas but its 11 o'clock at night
I'll see if I have any dreams to help me
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