Reviews for Critical Mission Failure
Ash Lee Brodford chapter 3 . 11/23/2016
Time loops! I freaking love me some time loop goodness
VGirl7553 chapter 3 . 3/15/2016
Love this. Excellent concept and you did a great job with it too. Wonderful writing. The story is well-done overall.
Shootingstar7123 chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
This was a very interesting story! I enjoyed it.
serphxheat chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
I love this story so much! It's amazing! Such a fun and interesting take on the prompt great job.
Luvondarox chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
Okay. I'm officially hooked. I can't wait to read more!
milly-finalfantasy chapter 3 . 12/18/2011
Great Story :)

many thanks
luk3us chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
I always loved these kinds of Sci-fi episodes from various series, great to see it applied to the ME universe.

Will it be as simple as saving Shepard or is there a deeper reasoning? Can't wait to read more. _
Talhiri chapter 2 . 12/15/2011
Interesting twist of events didn't expect the time traveling, curious to see what happens next.
Catori1207 chapter 2 . 12/15/2011
I am seriously liking this! Can't wait to read more :)
milly-finalfantasy chapter 2 . 12/15/2011
interesting story

Keep em coming :)
Drizzit101 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
This reminds me of ground hog day, love it!
Nanobot5770 chapter 2 . 12/15/2011
Interesting story so far.

I like the way you took all the elements from other Sci Fi series (or the Groundhog Day movie itself) und put it into Mass Effect.

Especially the parts where he has to safe the toast or Goldstein.

I'm eager to see how he will handle the next loop.

Keep up the good work!
Elemental Serenity chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
I love it! Interesting take on a Critical Mission Failure, can't wait to see where you go with this. Not to mention I love Garrus lol. Update soon! :)