|Reviews for You're Coming Home With Me|
| ethereallover chapter 1 . 7/28
What an amazing one-shot!
So much emotion, so tenderly expressed... I enjoyed reading this!
| NCfan19 chapter 1 . 2/26
So well written and insightfull
| UniKatFox chapter 1 . 1/26
I love you for this! Made me visualize the show quite clearly. Wonderful job, thank you very much for making this one-shot.
| Wickie chapter 1 . 1/12
Thank you! That was a wonderful story ! It's near-perfect. :-)
May I just say that sometimes I missed John's thoughts and feelings? You described them so well so often, but I especially think of John and Margaret sitting on the bench and John finally clasping her hands. From "The idea that Margaret would offer her assistance to him in such a way as only a business associate pained him" to "Thornton moved his hand (...) and tucked it between her clasped hands" there's a deep sentimental journey, yet we only get the description of the scene. But what made him act like this? Particularly after the "businesslike" impression he got of her? I think you could fill that gap wonderfully... and I would love to read it!
| nancyjeanne chapter 1 . 10/23/2016
| Babelvr54 chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
This is so beautiful. Thank you, it's exactly what I imagine John went through... Keep up the great work
| Erzuel chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
Wow I loved it 3333 thanks for making me dream a bit more of this amazing story that is N&S 3 your way of describing Thornton's thoughts was very very good , all these emotions ... It was so realistic :D
| deborah. vandeusen chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
That short story was great. Just right, and I could hear their voices and see their faces. What a fabulous way to describe the meaning of what they were thinking, and feeling. I loved, loved, loved it, and I can now sleep well visualizing the end of the movie. Thank you, Deborah
| Isa chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
Great, loved every word, every line. I felt like I was watching the final scene all over again, but your writing made it so intimate.
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
Excellent one shot. Good perspective piece as well.
| Lisa chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
great work, loved every moment.
| Lisa chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Well done. I enjoyed it tremendously.
| katalena chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
This was absolutely beautiful :) you have great writing skills!
| Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
Very nicely written. :)