|Reviews for My Little Denarians|
| Caffeinedelusion chapter 5 . 1/31
Wow... talk about epic misreading of the source material. Molly shared the 'Ragged Lady' persona with Leanansidhe, and there's no way to be sure that any of the corpses marked by the Ragged Lady were actually murdered by Molly. Further, she states that her goal in that role was to create the impression that Chicago was still under the protection of a White Council wizard, and while the Wardens want her dead because her sentence is no longer suspended, violating the Laws of Magic would actively undermine that goal. Lashiel never had a direct line into Harry's head, and thus couldn't know directly of her being scorned. Uriel himself has flat out stated in 'The Warrior' that Harry (while not a direct 'instrument of divine will' like the Knights of the Cross) is a designated 'divine catspaw', and is by happenstance engineered into places where he does good both actively and passively. To claim that he is responsible for millions of deaths, while deeply dramatic, isn't supported by the actual written material in the least.
| Azjerban chapter 27 . 11/19/2013
The ending... it is a very good ending.
Well-earned by those within the story. Well-written.
Thank you for making fiction worth dying for. I have no complaints.
PONY PONY PONY
| Azjerban chapter 19 . 11/6/2013
And Harry (and everyone else) delivers cleverness in spades! Well done, mister Qordath. Well done. I once again find myself taking notes on how to write better fiction.
| Azjerban chapter 18 . 11/6/2013
And then, Harry did something extremely clever and we were all impressed.
This was quickly followed by ponies resolving problems in unexpectedly effective ways.
I like what I'm reading. Still feeling... Pinkie keen...
| Azjerban chapter 15 . 11/5/2013
I'm a keep reading.
| Azjerban chapter 12 . 10/31/2013
Luna and Derpy, best friends forever. This makes me smile.
Eater of Muffins. Reminds me of some of the old tabletop RPG monsters.
And... snap. They have to deal with inventing space travel, saving Twilight Evildemonfacesparkle, Trollestia, beating Nick, AND John de Lancie? They should have just stayed in FO:E!
Par for the course for Dresden, though.
| Azjerban chapter 11 . 10/31/2013
Honestly, I expected Nicky to use his possum-play as 'not playing' Discord's game. It would have resulted in a win... for Discord, I suppose, and Nick tends to be rather egocentric.
Even knowing that the Mane Six would be abra-ca-fan-frikkin-tastic hosts for Denarian powers, that slippery shadowfaced jerk surprised me (which means you, the author, surprised me) with that stealth possession plan. Clever.
I didn't expect Sk****, either, although it turned out a very compelling battle - when RD said 'control dragonkind', my first thought was Dragonlance, and the Orbs. Not sure if that would have been better, or worse...
On a more this-chapter-related note, YES. Oh, definitely yes. The best of all science fiction(fantasy) settings. I'm with Dresden on this.
Methinks I see a shout-out to Last Action Hero, as well.
Very enjoyable. A few typos crept in here and there, but the story's so compelling that I don't really care. On to the finish!
| Azjerban chapter 2 . 10/29/2013
I'm posting a review without finishing the chapter. Never done that before.
I have only this to say: 'walk this way'
and he did.
Brilliant. I'm going to stay up waaaaaaay too early reading this.
| thebluninja chapter 23 . 8/20/2013
"this plan already 100% better then normal plans for fighting Denarians with Dresden, thanks to ponies." - But is it 20% cooler, Sanya?
| thebluninja chapter 22 . 8/19/2013
" let us hope that what you can do will be enough." - Well, it always has been so far.
"Mab, Queen of Air, Darkness and Female Villain Archetypes." - I bet she loves the new title.
"minor details like what species she was " - I know! It's like she can't change it on her character sheet with a simple Polymorph spell!
"It must have been a very strange and frustrating place." - Oh Sanya, you poor, poor Russian man, you have absolutely no idea.
| thebluninja chapter 21 . 8/19/2013
"people would still be yelling at me and asking what the hell I was thinking." - I want to do that every time Harry pulls out a Coke instead of Mt Dew.
| thebluninja chapter 20 . 8/19/2013
" if I could find a way to kill God while making myself look like a complete moron" - If anyone could do it, it's you, Harry.
"Wizards named Harry have a bit of a bad record with [journals]" - rimshot dot wav
"the situation couldn't possibly get any – No! Don't say that. Don't even think that." - Too late!
"they weren't singing songs to little orphan children" - Actually, I can totally picture both of them doing so. Except Nicky would be singing while he, like, stalked them through an abandoned factory or condemned hospital while holding a bloody knife.
| thebluninja chapter 19 . 8/19/2013
"one-point-twenty-one jiggawatts of the magic of friendship " - Harry's damn lucky he didn't throw himself backwards in time and end up doing something stupid like causing his mother to fall in love with him.
| thebluninja chapter 18 . 8/16/2013
Harry, thou art an epic douche. Something tells me this plan involves getting to the moon somehow? I mean, where better to put the actual elements of harmony than on the moon where the bearers aren't around to use them and no one save Celestia can access them?
| thebluninja chapter 13 . 8/16/2013
"maybe I just have a really dirty mind, and there was a perfectly innocent and not remotely sexual explanation for all of this." - Who are you and what did you do with Harry Dresden?
" a harmless but lucky fool or an evil genius." - If she starts talking about Science! or perhaps has a trilobyte neckless, then it's the second. Oh gods, Derpy Heterodyne? Just end the world now.
"chocolate-covered flowers, with added hot fudge sauce, whipped cream, sprinkles, and a cherry on top."" - ... on the flowers, or on Rainbow Dash?
" Why do I always get the crazy ones?" - Because they know their own kind, obviously.