Oh so sweet and thanks for a very good read

I'm having mixed feelings about this story.
I absolutely LOVE your description of the attack, the context, how Lisbon found Jane and her POV during those events. Absolutely convincing, utterly moving, LOVE it !

The scene at the hospital is great.
I'ma big fan of this line : „That's a shame… Because you here, are a pretty little thing…"...That's something Fugue Jane could have definitely said !

I love how he feels a connexion with Lisbon. I love that the feelings seem more powerful than the memory.
I love Lisbon's POV when Jane left...I felt for her.
And I love how the first flashes come to Jane. The description is brilliant. You made us undertand how he 'sees' those things but can't give them meaning.

Truth to be told, I love everything...except for the ending : I'm having a hard time believing Lisbon would kiss Jane. I know she loves him and has been missing him for a month. But still, I can't imagine her kissing him, especially when he's in a vulnerable state.
I can imagine Jane realizing he was in love with her, since he sensed something -someone - was missing when he couldn't remember what/who ! But I find it difficult to believe he would act on his feelings when RJ is still out there.

It's still a very enjoyable story ! I mean : the ending is very beautiful, despite not thinking it would happen this way. You are very talented to describe feelings !

:D WTH, JANE?

*cowed!Jane*, also known as *apprehensivepokerface!Jane*

Ahh, give in, Lisbon. Go ahead.

Like it quite a lot. Have you seen the longer promo; it almost made my heart stop, especially since Jane is so hilarious and Grace's saying, "I hate him." He is beautiful yet slightly terrible. Very sweet story.

This story is AWSOME. You are THE BEST. Can't wait to see that episode, i know we must wait to thursday, but come quickly thrusday, we want to see this episode. I love this story. It's wonderfull, emotional etc. Awwwww Jane & Lisbon are together in the end and a kiss, wow, lovely. Jisbon 4 ever 3.