Reviews for The Alphas Seer
Mushishixxxholic chapter 9 . 8/23
Love it
Dr1zzy chapter 54 . 7/2
Great story !
Guest chapter 54 . 5/27
Absolutely love your story and the fact it's complete makes it awesome
electrogirl88 chapter 54 . 5/1
This was such a great story! I really enjoyed reading it. You did a fantastic job :D
Guest999 chapter 31 . 4/5
light blue dress, black tights and YELLOW shoes?! THAT DOESN'T GO TOGETHER OR COMPLEMENT EACH OTHER IN ANYWAY SHAPE OR FORM! and what is with the obsession of wearing thongs AKA butt floss. those things actually cause infections
BusanSatori chapter 2 . 4/4
I'm only on the second chapter, but I just want to say concept is good but I recommend just sticking to 1 POV (Jacob's). I dont need to know what Paul or the rest of the pack is thinking. We can find out through dialogue or body language. We dont need all the backstory either. All this unnecessary information is just slowing down the story. I'm going to try to keep reading, but its important not to slow down too much with info or it will get boring.
NaRuKo-InuTaiSHo-XD chapter 54 . 2/29
exciting fanfiction i really like Brooke
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 54 . 12/4/2019
Absolutely loved the story. Though I absolutely hated Bella in this story. But that's no surprise since I never liked her. Keep up the good work!
Sin Ouroboros chapter 54 . 7/13/2019
This story is very good , and I enjoyed every moment of it!
D00rFr4m3 chapter 54 . 5/30/2019
Right, well this was delightful. You really managed to make Brooke a pretty good OC, which I was slightly worried about initially. It's easy to go overboard with the whole 'seeing the future' thing. If you're not careful you end up with a boring character with few traits other than knowing *everything*. I think she's a little well adjusted since she's sort-of lived through being raped several times? I just put that down to not being the same as it actually happening to her when she has visions of it, despite it being real. I don't blame you for not opening that can of worms- it can be difficult to make normal characters believeable. Traumatized ones are even more difficult.

The Jake/Brooke relationship was also sweet, though it was really really fast in the beginning. Put that down to her already knowing him in a lot of ways, so she felt comfortable with him.

If you wanted too, there's lots of opportunity for linked sequels. You could do a Paul/Annie fic or Embry/Becca. If you wanted to advance the overall 'universe' a Leah/her imprint fic. A more direct linked sequel would be Seth/his imprint whose name I have forgotten. Lots and lots of opportunities!

I really enjoyed this, thanks for writing it.
twilight80 chapter 37 . 12/1/2018
She should’ve laid into him and not let him get away with it grr
Spazster chapter 3 . 10/7/2018
wow. OK I'm done. This is lame. You made your OC the poster child of Mary Sues. You needlessly bash characters to make your OC sound better because, if everyone but your OC sucks then readers will have to like her, right? Your cannon characters are grossly out of character. You use your homeland's terminology instead of the CHARACTERS terminology. For a published work, your grammar is atrocious. Overall I am extremely disappointed in this book and I'm happy I didn't finish it. It's the prime example of what a terrible fanfiction looks like.
Spazster chapter 2 . 10/7/2018
the book seems good so far but it is unbelievably frustrating that the author Keeps using British slang while the book was obviously set in America. It makes it hard to have an understanding to the nationalities of the characters. It's a bit lazy because this could have easily been prevented with more conscious writing and self discipline
piglet873 chapter 7 . 8/11/2018
That was Hot!
MoonGoddess111 chapter 54 . 7/24/2018
can you write a mini series sequel about her pregnancy journey? and their proposal, wedding and marriage?
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