Reviews for Alone
StarliteOracle chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
NamelessAnon chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Holy snap, you just captured what some of my interactions with my significant other are like... And that that I call them my Astral and I'm their Yuma...
Jo-ChanLover74 chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Oh gosh. That seriously made me cry. Seriously. Astral is such a good friend towards Yuma, and understanding his pain is the best part. Truth is, Yuma tends to hide his sadness whatever it takes, and doesn't want his friends to worry. However, it still worries them. Especially Astral. So, this was a great story. I loved it.


Johan-Lover74 xD x3
yugiohyaoiloverandsonicfangirl chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
this made me start crying a little. ;_;
Salariea Wishmaker chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
AAAWWW, that was cute!
the-not-so-innocent-uke chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
(to lazy to sign in XD)

WAHHHHHH poor emo yuma! i wanna hug him.
TheRoseShadow21 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
I got the feling that Yuma uses idioticness to hide his hurt also.

great story , keep it up!
Hana13 chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
...O-O...Wow...that was interesting...

Great job! You capture Yuma's pain pretty well from losing his parents...Poor Yuma...T-T

I also notice how Yuma does use various methods to hid his sadness or any other problems he has in a lot of episodes. He either avoid talking about it, tries to hide it, or fake cheerfulness...I feel bad for Yuma when I see him like that! T-T Although, he when worrying about Ryoga or Astral, he gets this look in his eyes, ya'know? Kinda of a sad look...

I can't wait for another story! - You're awesome!
Animecartoonlover36 chapter 1 . 12/14/2011 O.O

This story sounds a bit scary but awesome. You did a great job on this. Well, I hope you write more stories soon. :)
Itazuk chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
This is a really good fic. You showed Yuma's nature quite well with his depression and stuff. Sorry I'm not too good with words...but yeah, I quite like it. _b