|Reviews for Keep Away|
| mngrue chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Well, this was fantastic! Excellent work with this one. I love when teen Sammy is resourceful, rather than inept : )
| BlueSkyAtNight chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Such a cute story, I loved the ending. I think it's just because I love happy endings but I loved the plot and it was very well written.
| murphy9202 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
This is a great story. I really liked it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
i love this story, but i really love that you left the mushy father son speak out at the end. this ending is much better
| IrishNun chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Having all the chapters stuck into one large story makes it difficult to review. I had to read the whole story because I can only make one review at the end.
So, here’s what I thought;
I loved your descriptions of Sam’s struggle with John and Dean especially in Chapter 4 when he wondered if John would try to hurt Dean if the spell was casted the other way. So sweet. And in chapter 6 when Sam said “He wants another Dean”, my heart melted.
I loved Tilda, the psychic hooker, in chapter 6. What a character? Your descriptions were so good it was like she was standing in front of me… although I don’t know if that’s a good thing or bad thing! Her ‘guest’ after Bobby made me laugh out loud.
And of course, I totally loved when John finally came out of his curse to hug Sam. Aww! You’re right about leaving John & Sam’s conversation to our imagination, it would make the story too long & it was nicer to leave the story on Dean.
| hotshow chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
I thought this was an excellent story. Very well done. I'm looking forward to reading more stories you hopefully will write on Supernatural.
| threedays chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
This is AWESOME! I really didn't intend to sit down and read the whole thing start to finish, but - wow! I'm so impressed on so many levels. The writing is excellent, the characterization of the Winchesters and their hunter friends is just delightful, and the plot is thoroughly engaging. So, so good!