Reviews for Tomorrow's Picture
parischangedher chapter 19 . 8/28/2012
asdfghjkl hahahhaa xDD I love Ziva's idea of throwing the camera in the water, but for some reason I still don't think that'll stop her from getting pictures. Will she get a new camera?

Omg that whole thing with Vince and Penny and Tiva and the 'Vancouver Story' :PPP

I like how Tony was buying everything from all of the vending machines! xD
parischangedher chapter 18 . 8/25/2012
I. love. this. chapter. The whole thing. You should be 100% pleased with it! :3

I love the Tiva. And the whole Abby thing and how they reacted was so in character! I felt bad for Abby and thought Tiva were being a little mean but then I'm like well she is being a baby...point is I could see both sides of it so *applauds* xPP
parischangedher chapter 17 . 8/25/2012
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I SOUND LIKE ABBY WHEN SHE'S RAMBLING AND SHE CAN'T STOP OMG OMG OMG OMG BECAUSE I LOVE IT AND IT'S ASDFGHJKL AND SADJSASA AND THE TIVA AND THE TONY AND THE ZABBY AND THE HEADLOCK AND THE PHONE CALL AND MCGEE AND JUST ASDFDSHJKSA I CAN'T EVEN MAKE SENSE OF THIS I'M SORRY OKAY JUST LIKE KILL ME OR DISOWN ME OR I DON'T KNOW THAT MAKES NO SENSE BECAUSE WELL YOU DON'T OWN ME BUT BUT IT'S AN EXPRESSION YOU KNOW SO ASDFGHJKA

...yeahhhhhhhh. :PP
parischangedher chapter 16 . 8/25/2012
AASDGHJKLLAAFSHSHSJKLLAJAHAH AGGABANALAIHAN I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY BECAUSE IT'S SO AWESOME AND JUST AGSHAHNANAKAUA I LOVE ALL OF ITTT

Alright let's try to make some sense of this...

Is it bad how much i can't wait for Carla to get fired? Like...fired...by a gun? xPPP

I loved the whole scene with the team an Abby and everyone ignoring tony and the elevator and well yeah xDD aww poor tony nobody tells him anything hahahaha

Omg the suitcases...that reminds me of how I'd travel if I went away...I mean maybe not that much...but it'd be up there...:PP

AWWWWW THE TIVAAA I LOVE IT ASDFGHJKLASDFGJKKL
parischangedher chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
ASDFGHJKLASDFJDSFHDSKJCHDFSJ FDSKAFHDJFCHDJS JDHFSDHFIODSW NWOIFDJ DSKNCSDHCNISHD OH THE TIVA MEL I LAV YOUS XDDDD

No but I know you! You're going to make us (really me cuz I haven't read it yet) suffer when you mess with them. URGHHHH

KILL CARLAAA NOWWW I WANT HER GONE I EVEN HATE HER NAME

LET ME GUESS TONY BOUGHT THE NECKLACE RIGHT?!

Awwwwww adfhsdkaf TIVA TIVA TIVA TIVA AND MORE TIVA I LOVE IT ME GUSTA

One thing though...you make Gibbs reallyyyyyy mean in your fic xPPP But really he isn't the nicest guy I guess...:PPPP
parischangedher chapter 14 . 8/24/2012
ASDFGHJKL OH THE TIVA I LOVE IT FINALLY NO MORE OF THAT IDIOT CARLA XD

Gosh I hated that girl. But that fight omg! I loved it!

And I knew Gibbs wouldn't do anything to them.

Ziva would've gotten a medal. Just saying.

"You stay here tonight. With me. Right here."
asdfdsfasdhgjsdghasjgvfag DEAD

And OMG THAT WHOLE PLANTS AND HER SITTING ON HIS KNEE IS IT REALLY HIS KNEE THIS TIME OR...HAHAHA JKJK :PPP...OR AM I? ;) That reminded me of something that happened with a guy I liked last year he sat behind me and wouldn't take his feet off my chair and class was starting so I had no choice but to...err...yeahhhhxD And then when he finally moved them I slumped like low in my seat and put my head back on his desk in retaliation xDDDD

Lol well anyways ME GUSTAA xDDD
parischangedher chapter 13 . 8/24/2012
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OMG ASDFAHSGJSDKLFJLFJS;DCDSNCVSDBVWEUFIA NDSCNODN SNFDKJDSKJFLSDFJIUSHFSDNC

OH THE ZABBYYYY AND AWWW ZIVA COME HERE LET ME HUG YOU MAI BABAAAAYYYY

YAYYY TONY SAVES THE DAY BUT URGHHH GIBBS NO HE SHOULD'VE KILLED HER WAIT WHAT HAPPENED TO HER ANYWAYS?! xDDD

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parischangedher chapter 12 . 8/23/2012
Okay so while you're all sadfhdkshfsadhfasdfa about mine I'm like sahdfasdfhasfjiasdjfiasdfda about yours! XDD

"If I had not known any better, I would have said that Agent Emilia was a demon that ascended straight from hell. Good thing I did know better and that I did not fall for her charm or anything, so that I could safely come to the conclusion that, indeed, she was a demon from hell." OMG This was just perfection. :PP

Awww I hate how Tony didn't believe her but YAAYY NOW CAN HE KILL CARLA PLEASE I'LL GIVE YOU...UHHH...SOMETHING...XDDD "Touch her again and handing over your badge is going to be the least of your worries."

CARLA HOW DARE YOU HURT ZIVA I WANT YOU DEAD NOWWWW YOU CHEATING WHORE :PPPP

And omg I understood some of the Spanish! I mean not all of it but like...maybe half of it? Or a third? xDDDDD
parischangedher chapter 11 . 8/23/2012
OMG I KNEW IT I SO KNEW IT AS SOON AS YOU WROTE ABOUT THE PHOTOS I KNEW SHE WAS DATING SOMEONE ELSE OMG I WAS RIGHT ASFSJFDHSDJAHSJGFASHFGAHSG I FEEL SO PROUD OF MYSELF NOW xDDDDDD

But Tony might not believe Ziva when she tells him...she does tell him right? :P

I hope the whole Abby/Kyle thing works out. And I totally love the Zabby. Just saying. :PP
parischangedher chapter 10 . 8/23/2012
Awww another great chapter Mel! Seriously you have to sto writing so well it's hard to stop reading lmao jkjk I lavs you:PP

Urgh I really hate this Carla girl xD But I'm pretty pissed at Tony right now too. I mean gosh he should at least make it a point to talk to her she's obviously upset.
-_- Men. ahahhahaha:D

So anyways I love the whole McGee-Abby-Ziva movie night thing. So cute.

And I love how Gibs scared her off. GO GIBBS!WOOOHOOOO xD
how much longer until she leaves? urgh can I like strangle her through the computer? PLEASE?

Lol anyways...on to the next chapte!...and then onto hw...greatttt...
parischangedher chapter 9 . 8/22/2012
OMG okay so first I loveeee the whole tony clown calendar thing, although I do feel bad for himxP

ASHDHAKAKAY I HATE CARLA EVEN THOUGH I KNOW IT'll END WITH RIVA BUT OMG I WANT HER TO DIE BU ZIVA'S HANDS. Oh and I noticed something...you made her Puerto Rican...did you like model her after someone you hated? ;P ahahahah well anyways I lived the whole asshole in Spanish thing stumping her!

I love how McGee thought Ziva was jealous because she so is! And I also love how she didn't understand what Abby and Ziva were talking about - andddd I love the ZABBY :DDD

ZIVA MAI BABY YOU CAN TOTALLY CONPETE WITH HER ARE YOU KIDDDING ME YOU COULD LIKE DESTROY HER OMG

Oh and I loveeeee how Tongs mad about not knowing they were leaving...but I mean...he doesn't deserve to know...well I mean Ziva did push him away...BUT HE LOVES HER AND HE SHOULD KNOW ZIVA WOULD REJECT HIM BECAUSE SHE'S SCARED

LET THEN HAVE A HAPPY CHRISTMAS!

When does this take place anyways? How close is Christmas? xD

Anyways...awesome chapter!
parischangedher chapter 8 . 8/22/2012
MEL MEL MEL MEL MEL WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WHYYYY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME OMG. I MEAN I KNOW YOU SAID THEY'D KISS AND THEN STUFF WOULD HAPPEN BUT I MEAN COME ON ASDFDSHGJDSFDSKAFHSDJKFHASJK HFAS WHY DO YOU HATE ME WHY DO YOU HATE TIVA OMG XDDD I THINK I'M LIKE A MASOCHIST OR SOMETHING BECAUSE I LOVE IT AND YOU WRITE SO WELL AND OMG I CAN'T SDFSDAFSDGFSA

"I won't die, I promise. And if I do, then you have my full permission to bring me back to life and kill me yourselves." She laughed dryly at her joke. "Get it?" she said as she held on to Bert with one arm, giving him a squeeze, and gripped her Caf-Pow in the other hand, the straw in her mouth." OMG I love it. so. freaking. much. :PP

"You guys don't think he was kidding about the Caf-Pow vending machine thing, right?" SO HILARIOUS OMG 333 DOES SHE REALLY GET ONE?! BECAUSE SHE SO SHOULD.

AWWW MI BABY ABBY! I'm so glad you decided to address the whole adoption thing and that you had Abby confide in Ziva but it makes me wish Ziva would make it even and confide in her back! :P

I loved the whole Gibbs scene and how he knew Tony was on the phone:PP

Omg I love Tony getting Ziva's boots:PP So this is set in the winter then...OMG IS THERE GOING TO BE A CHRISTMAS CHAPTER?! WOULD ZIVA GET A PICTURE OF HER PRESENTS? :P

And omg I love the whole Beauty and the Beast thing. Love. It. And the movie nights, and the whole friend thing - LIKE THAT SCENE FORM SEASON IDK 6 OR 7 WITH THE MOVIE NIGHT AND THE POPCORN AND THEN THE NEW ONE "AGENT DAVID DO YOU REALLY CONSIDER ME TO BE IN YOUR LIFE" #DEAD

"A shudder ran down my spine when his tongue thrust into my mouth, and I, of course, let it. Something was telling me to pull away, but it only made me want to continue hanging on, even if by a thread. I could taste the cocoa in his lips and in his mouth, but I'd be lying through my teeth if I said I did not like the taste of it from his end."
OMG I LOVE IT AGAIN MEL WHYYYY XDDDD

As much as I love and hate this at the same time, it was sooooo realistic and in character, especially the ending. I love how she broke the mugs and the thing with the stain 33333333

SO YEAH. I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS. A LOT. AND I REALLY NEED TO GO DO WOKR NOW, BUT OMG. YOU SEE HERE'S THE THING. I LOVE YOUR LONG CHAPTERS BUT IT'S SO HARD TO REVIEW THEM BECAUSE I LIKE EVERYTHING. I MIGHT AS WELL COPY AND PASTE THE WHOLE THING INTO THE REVIEW AND THEN JUST BE LIKE ASDFHSDHGFSADHGASLDHGSADHGAH SDGSAGA XDDDDD
parischangedher chapter 7 . 8/22/2012
ASDFGHKSJDGHASDKJLGSHSDKLGHS HIHFOIS OMG MEL REALLY?! YOU HAD TO MAKE THIS SUPER AMAZING?! I WAS JUST GOING TO READ A CHAPTER OR TWO AND THEN DO SOME WORK AND READ OMRE LATER BUT GRRRRRRRRRRR I DON'T WANNA STOP SOON BUT I HAVE TO WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME OMG

"I treasured all of my body parts, including my ass – at least from Gibbs, I did." hahahahhaha omg that was hilarious :PPP It would've been even funnier if you said 'especially' instead of including xDDDD

I'M SO GLAD ABBY'S OKAY3333333 And I love how she was concerned about ziva while she was the one in the hospital - that'sjust like her! OH THE ZABBYYYY XDD I think your idea what you told me last night is a good one for this:PP

SO. MUCH. TIVA. I LOVE IT ASDFHJGKLDGVHSDJKHVFASKDHFSA I CAN'T. I'm so glad Ziva admitted it to Tony and that he believed her. And omg the whole single bathroom and Tony watching Ziva not pee xD

"But, God, I could not help but think that our best moments always seemed to happen in the bathroom" I think this is like one of my favorite quotes everrrr I LOVE IT SOO MUCH AND IT'S SO TRUE HOW CAN WE EVER LOOK AT BATHROOMS AND ELEVATORS THE SAME AGAIN OMG hahahahha

...so anyways...uhhhhh... I loved this chapter xDD
parischangedher chapter 6 . 8/21/2012
Okay first of all YOU BETTER NOT KILL ABBY ASDFDSHJGKSAGHKGVA NOOOOOOOO SHE'S UPSET BOUT GIBBS BUT I DON'T THINK THAT'S WHY SHE'S ACTING SO WERIDLY AND OMG STAHP IT WITH THE TIVA NO WAIT DON'T I NEED IT BUT ASDFDSHGSDJGASDGHSFGAHFG

I love how Tony's just like "I did yake you out for dinner" and then he says he doesn't mean to brag I mean that's just so typical of Tony it could totally happen!

AWWW I feel so bad for Ziva is this like a new Mossad attack or some unheard of technology or is she going nuts and OMG YOU BETTER NOT PUT HER IN A STRAGIGHT JACKET asdfsdhfdsjghsdjkghsdagjhsds lga jhgdfshgafds

But I loved the tiva really. I love how Tony was being all kind and he's in character which is really good and sdjfhdsjkahjkfa XD
conservativegirl chapter 31 . 8/21/2012
Good chapter, very dark but good!
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