|Reviews for Tomorrow's Picture|
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 34 . 12/2/2012
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 31 . 12/2/2012
This story is amazing great update! As one fanfic writer to another I know it can be hard to write some chapters because it dosen't go the way you want it too so its a pain to write but sometimes those chapters can bee the best! The best things come to those who wait
| killianspirateprincess chapter 34 . 12/1/2012
NO REALLY LIKE ASDAFGHJKLASDFHSADKJ WORTHY STUFF RIGHT HERE. EVERYONE ELSE GO HOME MEL'S THE NCIS FANFIC WRITER HERE B****** STEP ASIDE ;D
I LOVED THE DANCING THING AND HOW YOU TIED IN THAT LIKE PARALLEL TO THE OPERA THING AND I LOVEEEE THE WHOLE STEP ON YOUR FEET THING AND THE TALI VIDEO JUST GAHHH xP
AND THAT ENDING AND HOW SHE WENT FROM DANCING WITH "TALI" TO DANCING WITH TONY LIKE SHE FINALLY WAS ABLE TO MOVE ON ALMOST AND TRANSITION HER LOVE FROM TALI TO TONY AND JUST JSAKDGA GENIUS
AMAZING CHAPTER IS AMAZING.
| Alora chapter 34 . 12/1/2012
Wow, what a lovely chapter, thanks. It was a good read :)
I liked the end the best:)
Can't wait to see what happens next :) Dying in anticipation. XD
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 25 . 12/1/2012
Thank you for getting rid of her Its about time
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 20 . 11/29/2012
Good chapter and the bet was hillarious!
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 15 . 11/29/2012
Thank you! It's about time!
| ArtsyFalafel chapter 8 . 11/29/2012
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 14 . 11/29/2012
Thank you for getting rid of that witch I really REALLY hated her
| ArtsyFalafel chapter 2 . 11/29/2012
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
Ok I hate this Emilia chick Please get rid of her
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 5 . 11/28/2012
Ok I love this story but please tell me how did you come up with the idea for this story?
| Robern chapter 34 . 11/28/2012
very good, good to see you back!
| SavvyCatJ chapter 34 . 11/27/2012
Yay! I missed this story! I love how you put the opera thing in here. :) Love you Mel! 3
| NCIStivaLOVE chapter 34 . 11/27/2012
AHHH MEL THIS IS SO PERFECT! xx