|Reviews for Two Rivers: Beginnings|
| Andrew chapter 7 . 7/21
"She was a pretty African-american girl with red hair."
Uh... to be described as African-American, you have to be American, and HxH doesn't take place in America. Thought I'd point that out. If you were trying to explain Canary's skin tone, I'd suggest "dark-skinned".
| iiWolvesOfRuin chapter 24 . 6/2
Oh no PERIODCUJCKVUCJVKBKVCUFUFDUUXJCJCJCJXHXHXXHYZghnkjHgvcvjkhvvgvdfgghcxfggchyjyfg wHHHHYYYYY
| A-rex chapter 1 . 5/21
Do u think u could work on"ENTWINED" I kinda lykd it since its got potential
| trizsh15 chapter 2 . 5/18
| trizsh15 chapter 1 . 5/18
i'm back, sorry i stayed away from girl/gon for a while coz i cant watch hunterxhunter properly, keep picturing him as a girl you see.
| Your.Worst.Nightmare.1090 chapter 34 . 5/18
wow. but damn I've been following this story since the beginning
a bit forlorn but im glad to see such a great ending
cant wait for the sequel
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/18
Those damn brats are so cute, I am getting cavities.
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/18
Hey, now that the story is finished, I think you should edit it because there are lots of grammar errors.
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/18
Her charisma is absurd, not even Hisoka escaped ha!
Gon is cute in a very "I want to cuddle you to death" kind of way. How old is she? 12/13?
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/18
She can kill people with kindness and innocence.
| Canadian lamp chapter 8 . 5/8
Not even done with the chapter but i was SCREAMING. was Killua's dad friends with ging?! And the attacked by ants comment about food on the floor. I noticed that this wasnt styled after the newer episodes but in that edition they do actually get attacted my ants later on and that made me happy lol. Thank you for the story
| Canadian lamp chapter 4 . 5/8
Oh my lord its been hard to comment til now because its so gooooood. Gons all up and making a softy of hisoka there and this is just so amazing and adorable goodness thank you for this
| Guest chapter 34 . 4/9
Well that was crap at first the whole thing was good but when she died that was crap I wasted my time reading this the next one better be good like gon comes back to life and Lilly's and her get married
| Diclonious57 chapter 34 . 4/1
Of there wasn't a sequel I would throw a chair
| Diclonious57 chapter 30 . 4/1
It's just as creepy in the 2011 version