Reviews for Body, remember
mssdare chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Oh I loved it! The prompt appeared to be violent and yet you turned this into something so gentle and actually loving!

I loved that they didn't struggle - that Demetri just "pushed" and bruised Mike with affection. The desire WAS dark and raw but there were loads of warm feelings underneath.

The first bruising description - with the breaking capillaries under the skin reminded me of frost on the windows or ice breaking - it was very poetic:)

And I loved how you showed the distinction between violant fantasies - Demetri wanting to turn Mike while in him - and the reality. This is a good sum up for the whole KinkFest - because one dreams about smth doesn't mean one really wants that or would allow that to happen.

Xxx

MD
Debbi84 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Very good. I really enjoyed reading this.
Filia9 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
This was so very sensual. I enjoyed the emotion descriptions-the longing, the need, the urge to claim. Very strong and given in a rather vivid way. I haven't read of those two being paired before, and I think they fit this situation and prompt exceptionally, frail human and strong vampire. The title of the story was sweet yet dark also, a great reference. All in all, thank you for notifying me, this was a pleasure to read. You did such a lovely job :)
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