Reviews for carpet burns
kuriozum chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
I simply love it.
Lackadaisycal chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Love it! I like Karin too, and I hate when authors bash her in sasusaku stories. I'm so glad you didn't!
chocolateluvr170 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Simply amazing! :)
songs chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I really like Karin too! Good job :)
superhappy chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Got to love Karin. I always have and I always will.

But seriously, this was something fantastic to read. It was perfectly in character and I adored it.

-Violet in Technicolor
Strings of a Puppet chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I don't think I ever read a Karin fic before.

Ever. :O

But after reading this, which made me like her even more, I'm interested in her story. :)
xXxtellmewhyxXx chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
She's tolerable, sometimes. LOL. But this was different, and I actually liked it. Go figure. Good job!
none-so-lovely chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Hey hey,
Forgive me for reviewing a year-old work of yours, but it just jumped out of me from someone's "Favorites" and I was helpless to its (short-but-sweet) charm. See, I like Karin, too! She's an interesting character.

I LOVED your characterization of her. I'm way more picky in my own personal taste for how people portray her than I am most other Naruto characters—it's not on purpose, and I wouldn't put anyone down for their take—and I feel like I should let someone know when they've hit all the right notes for me. I liked the way you wrote both her interaction with and feelings for Sakura. Even the smoking, which I'd never thought about Karin doing until now, seemed like a natural tendency under your direction.

The last part (from "She paused, to breathe..." until the end) was simply perfect.

Most especially perfect was this: "She did not belong here in this death camp with this man-child with dark eyes. It hurt like an old wound, carpet burn on her kneecaps. Almost something painful, but okay as long as she didn't move certain ways." Such a beautiful illustration of Karin's feelings.

Thanks for the good read!
None So Lovely
mililli chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Aw I'd love to hear more! So glad that not everyone thinks Sakura and Karin have to be enemies
sadistic dreamkiller chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
As you requested, not favoriting without leaving a review.


I like your Karin. Have no idea what happens in the manga after Nagato revived everyone he killed and Konan died because I hated Kishimoto for that dick move. But well, here I am, still reading fictions. I seriously like your Karin, probably the best that I've ever read.

Delicate Desires chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Whoa, a story that focuses mainly on Sakura, Karin, and Sasuke- without Sakura and Karin hating each other! This was great!
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 3/13/2012


I wish this would be how Karin would actually react to Sasuke killing her. Her ploy in the latest chapters is confusing and a bit misleading... I've still no idea if she harbors feelings for him. ANYWAY THIS IS FANTASTIC.
mistressinwaiting chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Love what u did with karin
Shinoburedo chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
This is such a brilliant take on Karin and Sakura's interaction. Yep, Karin is too smart for Sasuke. I think she's actually the only smart girl in Naruto, since she got right away how poisonous Sasuke's existence was for her and was through with him the instant he turned into a psycho MOFO. I love how she stood up for herself. Your portrayal was very succesful in catching that individualistic part of her, and I loved it.
whatsername911 chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Great job! I like the way you write Karin.
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