Reviews for One More Plan Shot to Hell
BloodyFrost chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
It's been four years since you posted this. I guess this fic is dead now.

Still, it would have been nice if you continued.

Also, a beta-reader would have helped clean up this fic a bit.

The story plot looked okay though.
Robert K. Hackney chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Pretty good start there. Thing is, I never liked the idea of Mousse with Shampoo. The best thing for him would be to lose his fixation; he really deserves better than that evil-hearted witch.
YEN-X-54 chapter 1 . 2/19/2003
I like it. I really do. Though, your fic hasn't been updated in almost a year, I hope you find it somewhere in your heart to continue the story. I mean, an original coupling! Wow, how rare is that? Someone else out there has the same idea as me. Again, I like your story and please, if the inspiration strikes, continue.
AresGoddess chapter 1 . 6/10/2002
More! I like this! Wanna see more! Poor Ukyou though...
Jaid Skywalker chapter 1 . 5/8/2002
Interesting...I'd like to read more!
Ghost in the Machine chapter 1 . 5/7/2002
"Mine again!" Huh? Mousse, Shampoo has never been yours in the first place. Don't delude yourself.

More seriously. This needs an editing pass made. At least one place where you forgot to separate two words and another where you forgot to capitalize "Mousse". I suggest you find yourself a beta-reader.