|Reviews for HetaOni: Final Loop|
| Rosycat chapter 18 . 5/18
This was so dark and sad and amazing and well written and so so emotional. You built on the characters so well, and... I can't even properly put this into words. It was a bit confusing at first, but I think it was meant to be.
Well, well done. Wow. My baby Ita...
| Amazing Places chapter 18 . 3/11
Oh my gosh you're amazing - this is just so much awesomeness and I was really worried that Italy wouldn't make it out, but he did and I'm so relieved -
| mssunnymuffins chapter 18 . 12/27/2016
Wow, what a lovely ending. I don't fully understand what happened but it was still lovely! I particularly like how there was no crying, no sudden romance from Germany, just a focus on the brothers and how they're so emotionally unsable that they cling together and can barely think or speak. I just really love this story too much for words. The ships were not a personal fav as i feel they sucked from the focus or seriousness, but it's fine in the end. And that poot italian1. I liked him. I will definitely be heading to the recovery story - thanks for the amazing read!
| mssunnymuffins chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
This. First. Chapter. Is. A. MA. ZING! I normally wait until the end of a story to review, but I started this mid CHAPTER because OH MY GOSH THIS IS ACTUALLY SO GOOD! Like, first of all, I don't ship giripan that often but here, Greece's methodical understanding of Japan is just perfection. "A tilt of the head that asked 'do you like me'" and so on, or him understanding when to touch or when not to touch. SO. PERFECT. I CAN'T EVEN! I normally find Japan has to go all OOC to match up well with Greece, but, I actually could see Greece thinking about him and his ways like this and making their relationship work. My heart hurts for my precious little baby (Japan) after all your description of his emotional trauma. He must lock the door, he cannot take off his belt, he violently cries after everything, and yet he still has his pride to keep up. He's shamed at himself crying and refuses to scream out because someone will hear him and possibly judge him (but still hear him). It's just so nicely done and thought out. I can feel the PTSD! OH, and I love the remarks about how he could be brought to tears only after something deep because "it couldn't be his integrity - he'd defend that with his life. And it couldn't be his life either, because he'd forfeit it for something he truly believed in". I can't properly express how perfect that it. It just captures Japan and all that he is and his character and his country's past all in one lovely idea and like, it's just magical. I'm assuming all the chapters will be this magical because this really made me accept a ship, accept some ideas into my headcannon, and made my heart hurt, whereas a good story can usually only do one of the three for me. I just love it. 10/10 so far. On to the next one!
| P chapter 18 . 4/22/2016
Thank you, for this wonderful fic.
How good is it... And finally, Holy Rome had found peace...
| SnowyCocoa chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
This needs more reviews. This is just... no words.. no words anymore.
Oh! I have something to share about the whole "red-ink" thing. During the Renaissance period, artists would use red ink in their sketches. It was quite popular back then but now it's seen as "evil".
I'm Chinese and my mother told me that when you write someone's name in the colour of blood, you are causing bad luck to befall on them. Perhaps the same can be said here?
Sorry. My writing isn't very good, but I'm an art freak, so...
Anyway, I love your method of storytelling as a mouse loves a grain of rice!
| SnowyCocoa chapter 12 . 8/6/2015
In Chinese, we don't have double "i"s or double "o"s. Your story is so good! No, never mind, IT'S PURRFECT. Now to let my friend type (she's too used to typing in Chinese. Please pardon her extremely broken English.)
Wahhh~ zomok u derr story so good? I wish I can write like dat lei! Aiyah...
(Translation) (because she is using Manglish) ((because we are Malaysian))
Wahhh~ why is your story so good? I wish I could write like that! Aiyah...
| Fyoex chapter 18 . 7/23/2015
Amazing! I really dont know how to say more, but this story was truly fantastic to read! I did get lost occasionally, but it was epic.
| Hetalian4Life chapter 18 . 7/15/2015
Oh. My. Gawd.
*looks down at the ocean of tears I just cried*
I came here for a depressing story, and I found it.
Good Lord, I'm done. Done with this. Done with HetaOni. I've played the game, I've watched playthroughs, I've read fanfiction, I've seen fan art, hell, I've drawn it. But this story is the last straw. There is no damn way I can continue with this. The feels, man. The feels.
You wrote this so well I could actually see what was happening from the nations' eyes. And that made it so much worse.
This is the end of HetaOni I was waiting for.
| Magykal-guest chapter 4 . 6/16/2015
Oooh, that was so sweet in the end! Or, as sweet at the UK family can allow. Good job!
| deletedoutofembarassment chapter 13 . 11/7/2014
I was listening to Empty Chairs at Empty Tables while reading this and I started crying
| Karano chapter 18 . 9/16/2014
Holy Shiva, I know I am probably very late and all but I want you to know that, after seeing stuff about this I on tumblr I got here and started reading and I...
I am destroyed from so many feels and from the sheer perfection of this fic. You know how some fandoms have a novel-long, godly written fanfic that everyone who read it worships because it's just so good you don't have a choice?
Hetalia has 3, yours, Auf Wiedersehen Sweetheart and Gutters.
Congratulations for being in the top 3 fanfic bosses.
| final review chapter 17 . 9/14/2014
This is an amazing way to end up the meanest and most cruel fic I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It's meaner that Snakeskins, Recovery, or any other aph fic that tries to be emotionally ruining simply because this fic doesn't try to be mean, it just is. I love how they all come together, and each of them contributes their individual strengths, and even the whiney bitch Switzerland contributes in the end, giving away his name. I'd review on the actual last chapter, but I already did when I first finished the fic, so thanks for a great read and bye
| reviewer chapter 16 . 9/14/2014
"Switzerland is a whiney bitch" and Norway being so possessive over the North Pole were great. I loved all of the interactions, and how quickly the news spread. Also, Italy is finally on his real final loop. That alone could make this chapter my favorite, but with everything else added in, it just took it to a whole new level of greatness.
| more review chapter 15 . 9/14/2014
The politics of the nations in this chapter are simply amazing. In a lot of fanfiction, the nations are focused on as people, and their interactions are all lighthearted and lovey dovey. In this monster of a fic, there are real consequences, and their interactions are political chess moves. I love how they fit into the world of this fic so perfectly.