Reviews for The Naughty Elf
amwine chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
I can't help but smile when I am reading this. I love how you fit her name for the story. The way she is skeptical that he is the real Santa. I lvoe it all. Great job..thanks!
amwine chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Very interesting. I can't wait to see where it goes. Thanks!
Gingerandgreen chapter 10 . 12/26/2011
White chocolate, eh? If only... Thanks for the fun, Sweets.


tsm0836 chapter 10 . 12/26/2011
Now if all 'soldiers' tasted like candy cane there would be a lot more happy Daddies and Mummies. Great little tale. Thank you.
colourfulchatterbox chapter 10 . 12/26/2011
The number of innuendos in this...woah.


So glad I didn't read this before brain would have been a scary place to be...I would have been giggling at work constantly :P

Thank you for writing and awesome story and I do believe that Bella was doing it on least some of her brain was...:P
dragonfly336 chapter 10 . 12/26/2011
Awwwwww..Twilly! I love you and completely loved this! Thank you for giving me a little Christmas laugh, each time I opened this! Hope you had a lovely Christmas. You definitely deserve it! XOXO
twiquarius chapter 10 . 12/26/2011
lol that was a crazy-sweet-funny one, thanks! :D
dragonfly336 chapter 9 . 12/26/2011
Loved it!
Grrlnorth chapter 10 . 12/25/2011
That was so cute and funny. Thanks for the chuckles!
marigold123 chapter 10 . 12/25/2011
Talk about falling asleep after sex! Well at least Bella seemed to enjoy herself. Bella swan elf...Mrs Santa Claus! Enjoyed!
marigold123 chapter 9 . 12/25/2011
Love them big thick candy canes! LOL! Enjoying!
marigold123 chapter 8 . 12/25/2011
Eww! Well at least Jacob phased back to human!
marigold123 chapter 7 . 12/25/2011
Well there are balls and boxes...and toy soldiers!
marigold123 chapter 6 . 12/25/2011
Mmmm! Chocolate starfish! Yummy!
marigold123 chapter 5 . 12/25/2011
"She continued, gesturing wildly, "I just love to stroke them. It was almost like petting my kitty." LMAO..."soft and velvety smooth, but incredibly hard too!" Oh hell! "I think screwing is so much fun, don't you Santa?" I definitely agree!
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