Reviews for Chaos Theory
stephanne chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
wow super nakakakileeg...!
i love how you wrote the story without straying from lucy and gray's original characters
really.. halos lahat kaya ng graylu fanfic na nabasa ko ay mejo ooc ;D
keep up the good work and write for more!
sai chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
this isn't the ending right? T_T because it just can't. this is really beautiful btw. one of those rare gralu fics that are just spot on. thank you :)
ShimmeringCrimson chapter 3 . 11/6/2012
GEMINI. I BET TEN BUCKS SHE'S GONNA USE GEMINI. XD I love the story, and can't wait to read more :D
chai chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
my second time reading this fanfic..
riz chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
TheGrowingTrees chapter 3 . 9/13/2012
i love your story!keep 't wait for the next chapter X)
Ayumy Usagi chapter 3 . 8/26/2012
I love this! :D Keep up the good work!
ms.icantthinkofanypenname chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
Wa-o! Really, KINILIG ako! Haha! Good job!
I.Dream.InDreams chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
Would it freak you out if I told you that I have fallen in love with chapter three? That it's 2 a.m. and I am desperately craving Chapter Four? That I had to forcibly restrain myself from just jumping ahead and reading it, but rather waited five minutes to review?

Because, um, all of the above are true.

GOD, this is FANTASTIC. I love your formatting, the sense of snarky cleverness, the word choice you use, the humor, ALL OF IT. Gray is becoming really yummy in my eyes. Not good! NOT. GOOD!

Sorry I'm such a ranter. :) Just know that I'm really, REALLY impressed.

(And tis really hard to write a review in mobile. Jesus.)

Jess 0:o)
Hitomi chapter 3 . 8/4/2012



No joke, I would make babies with this story!

...Mmkay, maybe not but I seriously love this story, and swear to god if you discontinue it I will hunt you down and force you to continue typing. Got it, woman?

Good. ]

katsuboshi chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
oh boy, lucy's hopeless! XD

wow, i really gotta commend you for this. the 2nd chapter was STELLAR but you've managed to outdo it with this chapter! it's official - i'm so in love with grayxlucy now! you write them so well! how do you do that? i love gray's response about why he decided to give money to lucy. very simple and so like him! lucy's reaction to his answer was hilarious. actually, all her reactions are too damn funny! she's like this walking one-man circus and i'm lovin' it!

also, what's funny about me reading this was my little sisters were watching disney's hercules next to me and meg's song "i wont say (i'm in love)" was playing. what timing! it totally fits lucy here. XD

i'm in love with your writing, i really am. you're a genius and i wish with all my heart that you continue this because it's so so good! happy writing! (:
katsuboshi chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
what a strange way to apologize. then again, it's practical if you consider gray's attitude on things. so yeah, so like gray to do that as an apology! XD

more importantly, their interaction was written beautifully! very cute, adorable, funny and sweet! my favorite part would have to be when gray caught lucy checking him out (eye-hump! i love you for that word!). i swearz - i can totes see him pulling something like that on her! lucy's reaction to that was also hilarious. and the "aaawww" moment for me would have to be when lucy noticed how tall gray is and began comparing their heights. why, if i can draw, i'd most definitely draw that part. but! woe is me.

all in all, i adore everything in this chapter! i love all the lines, the awesome description you gave of gray and just how you torment lucy like that. oh, the poor virgin!

please write more! this story _is_ a winner. (:
katsuboshi chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
this was just plain fun to read. i normally don't go for "girl talks" because they're always so annoying (you know how incredibly shallow and dumb some girls are? especially with men. definitely with men!) but this one was just so entertaining. i think i laughed through the whole thing!

anyways, love this! it's a great way to start the sequel and i'm really digging the parallelism with the first sentences in "denial, denial" (gray watches lucy sometimes) and "chaos theory" (lucy wonders about gray sometimes). you also write lucy so well - her thoughts were all amusing to read and the humour is just excellent. XD

i'm off to read the next chapters! ta for now
Noni-chan chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
THIS IS SO GOOD. I love Lucy's inner thoughts and how Gray confuses her. I cannot wait for the next chapter and for their friendly date. I shall be waiting patiently for the next awesome update! :)
Lillet chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Hehe, let me start with how I'm such a GrayXLucy fan! They're so sweet together and that "" of Milady666 is just SO adorable! Onto the story now, it's amazing! And so very very cute! And you've got all the characters smack down! When I read about Lucy's musings or her mental flailing around, I can so imagine her doing so in the anime. And Gray's character is so so..Gray at the same time. This story is what I've been surfing the fandom for! Please update soon!
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