|Reviews for Chaos Theory|
| joster13 chapter 3 . 5/20/2012
ohhh my god! i was laughing so hard after reading this. XD this fanfic is healthy! just gave me a good dose of laughter for the day.
looking forward to the next update!
always a fave! :]
| Crudy chapter 3 . 5/19/2012
Lovely! Why do they both have to be so slow dammit?
| WinterMelon.Pearl chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
WTH? I can't believe I didn't see that the 3rd chapter is already up! WTH indeed! Good thing I decided to reread everything. You heard (err... read?) me. I'm THAT addicted to your story. :]
Anyways. Brilliant chapter. It started out so funny. I especially loved this:
"Now, look here and listen well," the ice mage begins, taking the bag of Jewels from her hand and dangling it to her befuddled mug. "I didn't work my ass off for this just so you can throw it back to my face for something as stupid as your pride—"
"Hey!" Lucy cries, offended, but Gray simply ignores her.
-Poor poor Lucy. But I can totally see an irate Gray telling her that. XD
But then it turned around and became so... mellow and sweet! I LOVED the part where they sorta made goo-goo eyes at each other, but a bit peaceful and just... cute! It just-it felt so real. But not. It was kind of, I dunno. It's just... melting? Get it? I was literally melting into a puddle of goo while reading the later part of their scene in front of Lucy's apartment. And the last scentence? Oh man. Definitely one of my favorites. *sniff*
Oh, and because I went out and reread the whole thing, I hope you don't mind me rambling some more. :))
I really loved:
-the Lisanna/Lucy friendship. Lisanna is just completely amazing. I despise when people bash her because she 'gets in between the LOVE of NaLu'. She's seriously like one of my favorite characters! Loke also sorta gets in the way of NaLu but I heart him! Yes, I know this isn't NaLu but I just felt like throwing my two cents about her. *whistles*
-Gray ALWAYS saving Lucy from the river, be it pulling her by the wrist to steady her or holding her elbow. Esp. with that scene you described with Lucy standing on the platform and realizes that Gray is taller than she imagined and all that (I'm no good with descriptions). It's so subtle but SO SO GOOD! I don't think people took such notice of how great that scene is exactly. It's so adorable!
-Gray PERIOD. His coolness and barely-there protectiveness of Lucy. The way he'd look at her and... Oh my God, if I were in Lucy's shoes, I'd be MELTING, I tell you.
-The fishermen by the river, and the townsfolk! The fact that they're so amused seeing the two bicker and sighing, "Ah, young love" is sooo funny!
-Lucy's denial at the end. Poor girl. Even her brain is betraying her. *cackles*
I can't wait to see how their "friendly date" will go. But I think Lucy still needs to organize her thoughts and quell any doubts before she gets to prepare for the date. Oh well. I'll leave it to the wonderful authoress. Seriously, you're teh awesome. :]
| vampirella chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
I must admit, I normally avoid GrayLu fics (I'm more of a NaLu and recently a StingLu), but this one is very well written. The style is very creative, and I love the banter and plotline. I find myself cackling at a lot of the dialogue and events that transpire. :)
| Crazy-Crystal-Chan chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
This fic is totally hilarious AND adorbs! Gray nad Lucy are so... I can't figure out how to say it, but I LOVE reading them! Lucy's thoughts and denial are just too funny!
Sech, you're such a genius! Sometimes I find myself reading every chapter over and over again.
Please update, it doesn't have to be soon, or not so soon!xD
| xXRottWeilerXx chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
Oh my god! I must tell u, this is NICE! It's so hard to find good GrayxLucy fics like this. I hope u update soon! :)
Okay, wait, I'm gonna put this fic in my favourites.
| WinterMelon.Pearl chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
Holy crow (I'm trying to cut down on the swearing lately), I love both of you, DAMMIT (...)! I adored the chapter! SO effin' delicious, GrayLu-wise!
Fun part of it was that my brother had guests over and I couldn't use my computer cuz I 'accidently' broke it 'temporarily' so I could use his computer -coughspyoncollegeguyscough- I really did try not to laugh like a maniac and faint dramatically and be a freak to MORE people... Yes, this is the second time this happened to me.
I'm glad I found this fic! I want more!
| WinterMelon.Pearl chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
This story keels me, srsly. And I don't think I have enough brain cells left to formulate a decent review (actually, I don't think I could give a decent review even my life depended on it XD)...
But I'll try?
I thought that the Lucy-musings were awesome. Er. And the flashbacks too. Gray is such a cool character but I can totally see him acting batshit crazy like that when he likes someone and doesn't know how or what to do about it (except for Juvia because well. You know.)
Er. Actually every thing's awesome so I'm going end this now before I make a bigger fool of myself.
-insert apology for grammar errors and spelling funkiness-
It's the keyboard's fault, I swear.
(I'll try to review more intelligently next time.)
| XxCaitlinxX chapter 3 . 5/16/2012
This was exactly what I needed to cheer me up after reading Fairy Tail's 286. It was fabulously hilarious and entertaining and fluffy and yummy and I'll just stop trying to find words to describe it now for I know I will never be able to find enough! Thank you for cheering me up with this. :D It was great. Really.
I hope to see something by you again! GrayLu fans are LUCKY to have you aboard our ship! o
| EternalDreams chapter 3 . 5/16/2012
I just want to say that of all the Gray/Lucy fanfics i've read this has to be my absolute favorite. It's just perfect in everyway: characterization, atmosphere, setting, everything. It's also probably one of the most beautifuly written fanfics i've ever read. It made a lasting impression on me, because, even though it's been months since I read it for the first time, I still think about it and remember it everyday.
Beautiful, beautiful work. I feel so blessed to have such a talented writer be one of my best online pals. :)
Belated happy birthday, Sech!
| realperson909 chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
I love this story and I cant wait for the next chapter!
| shortiix3 chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
bahahahaha damn that was such a laugh! How can you make it so funny, I can NEVER write stuff like these and make it end well -.- Im only good with romance but not this kind of comedy-romance. Eh you have to teach me, please?
| Strawberry.Orihime chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
i am so delighted to see 'chaos theory' updated. this is definetely one of my fave stories from you...(even though i like all of them.)
i like this gray very much. your GRAYLU is sooo good. he's like cool, kind of a bully, and really, really sexy. d'aww. and lucy! it's always fun to see her squirm like that in front of gray!
you say that i flatter you but you are the one flattering me with your splendid writing skills. :)
the story's atmosphere, feelings, characters lines and everything is just so beautiful and i love it.
now, okay. onto the chapter. ehem!
way to go gray! he made lucy ask him out! this is so good XD
this chapter's another work well done and i really really enjoyed reading it! they're just both so cute and sweet in their own ways, especially lucy! (see above)
btw, i read something about 'chaos theory' in your profile and i can't help but think that the line you've been attaching below the title every chapter has something to do with that 'unconventional ending', and that it seems to be foreshadowing something tragic, but I HOPE that's just me. T_T
don't break our hearts please! because the recent FT chapter is already heartbreaking as it is. (boo, juvia, boo!)
also, i gotta be honest. i don't know whether i'm looking forward to your next update because i can't get enough of really good GRAYLU fanfics, or dread it because I know one of my favourites is gonna be finishing soon D:
still, i hope you update soon (and that it won't be as tragic) 3! whatever happens, i'm still an avid reader! :D
| AOZU chapter 3 . 5/11/2012
I can see the walls of friendship between them breaking down and turning into love. I hope Lucy pulls her head out of her ass and go for it! Why is it so hard for her to believe Gray likes her? She's pretty, she's sexy, she's overall nice, PLUS! She's "interesting". *winks* :D
| imjuzakyd too lazy to log in chapter 3 . 5/11/2012
ohmigod ohmigod ohmigod that was so so so sooo adorable :) and YES! the awaited realisation that lucy really likes gray is finally dawning! mwahaha :) its so funny reading about how her tongue seems to betray her every time! she doesn't even realize she's getting jealous of juvia! ahahaha!
thanks so much for updating (i was lmao-ing) haha and i decided to read the 2nd chapter again and fell about laughing all over again :)) anyway you're amazing and I'm already excited for the next chapter! till next time! :D
oh, before i forget, i was the one who asked about the "butt-monkey" so thank you for that! #enlightened