Reviews for The Plan Of Action
mageofmyth chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
I really liked this. I always thought that they should do less standing around and more action.
Debate4life chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
It's amazing to consider the missed opportunities to be proactive in the HP universe. I enjoyed how your story explored one. I hope to read more from you in the future.
Rake1810 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Great one-shot, my only complaint would be the lack of detail following Malfoy's abduction but i understand adding that detail would turn this into a multi-chapter story.
ak chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
il y a des sorciers qui savent comment gagner une guerre?
Lourdes08 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
lol this was amazing.
AragornII chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Nice job. enjoyed the story...
David M. Potter chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
monbade chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
very good 1 shot

slashslut chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
ha! great plot and nice to see characters written as having some brains and mindlessly following dumbledore though it would have been nice if he'd been taken down a peg or two as well
soccersack chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Excellent story. I found it interesting and original. Moodys character was so much more believable than anything else I have read.
loretta537 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
this was a good story, i hope you will continue it for the rest of the war.
RebeccaRoy chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Very nice! Love seeing a strong Moody working with Sirus here!
akan chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
bonne fic!
arcaneEscapist chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
You wrote Moody rather well. It's totally plausible, too.

You not having English as a first language wasn't easy to get from the text itself; you write better than most English-speakers.
Izzyaro chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
I really enjoyed that. You captured Moody's paranoia perfectly, and I loved his plotting with Sirius.

Really ncie piece :)
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